10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
no feedin
U spit first

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nigga im a protegy, bitch dont wonna fuck wit me, aighnt goin be no comedy, end up in a trama G!/ niggas lights out cuz im cuttin your powers, knock knock nigga dropin ur ass like the towers/ill warn u now i aighnt nottin to play wit,u aighnt no rapper bitch dont even try to stage it/see your ass is now famous when i leave u fried, all over the media under fuckin homicide/so common now its cat in the hat, its a lyrical war we at mic ta mic combat, never catch me unprepaired cuz i got my vest and a gat, ya'll new blasta was phat, cant believe u ran into suicide like dat/youll never be famous never make money off rappin, lifes a bitch and it funny how that shit happenS?/nigga gettin fitted for a ass kicken the way i just spat, sneak preview of blasta just stare into the gat/

kinda rushed but w.e still new at this

This nigga couldnt "bring heat" if he came wit a "nine"1
ur so whack even "crack feins" wouldnt fuck wit ya "lines"2
I'm "bringin beef" to tha table like "mcdonalds servants"
u couldnt "spit hot" shit if u eat 1million "tabasco plants"
'e" town must stand for "exogenous" cuz ya rhymes "fake"
this nigga blasta is about as "wet" as a "dryed out lake"
your on "games" in a "rush" to take this L yea right dude
excuses are for the weak juss admit that your whack dude
i'll murder you have u "gone in sixty seconds" like nick "cage"
cause @ this "job" your below "average" like "minimum wage"

my structure is a lil messed up cause i was countin my lines and i forgot to erase the numbers on well tho lets get the voting started

I give this battle to Mr. for better punches and better flow, the others dudes flow and structure is horible, work on that man and throw some harder punches, vote - Mr.

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okay nice battle shit ws madd short tho....

structure-wattz got it...blast shit was lookin nervous
opener-wattz...blast ya shit barley ryhmed no hate
punchlines-wattz..hands down
creativity-wattz...da fein line
personals-umm nun
enjoyed-mr wattz...i felt his verse cuzz his structure was betta and i understood his lines some of em were played but it was enuff da wuin dis battle

my vote-mr wattz

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i giv mi vote mr.wattz,jus better lines

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^^nice vote LOL

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honestly i wasnt feelin wattz he had nice structure but some of his lines didnt even rhyme and he didnt even use hard punches like i know he can wattz honeslty u came half assed fam...blasta your flow and structure is really off work on that but i think that if you put your bars into lines instead of a paragraph u would win this hands down strong multies nice personals good wordplay i was feelin your verse except for the structure....so even tho ur shyt was off you get my vote

vote: blasta

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lol,ok mi vote got disqualified!it was the second vote i got disqualified in a row!come on guys it woz late over here.lol.anywayz i give it mr.watz.he had better punches and the opener was sweet man.blasta i woz feelin ur shit too man but i can only give it one of ya.

My vote:mr watz

but i dont think its counted now.soz man

I thought that Blasta came pretty hard but there was no thought behind his rhyme, they were just words that rhymed. Mr Watts came wit some pretty clever punches, and even though some of them didn't rhyme, they still hit hard.......... That's why he gets my vote.........

Vote - Mr Watts

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mr wattz definitely on this one, the gone in 60 seconds was nice

uppin 4 votes
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