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Just a lil sumthin
IP: 0EB2 26E5
Runya crib glocks out heavy wit steel
Bustya rib heaters up cookin a meal Takin it fast niggaz be snitchin fo cash Put’em in plastic bags if cops breakin them cash like sanford & son they just talking that trash I aint hear shit if they missin niggaz don’t ask Cuz u could be next lifeless body possessed only thing they found was a shotty and vest Teflon but the chest gone Shoulda stuck to Kevlar cuz a desert e to the face have ya memories erased cuz u be next ta god like pastor ma$e or pastor troy we ready like energizers we outlast wit toys u want sum enough lead 4 a pencil factory ghetto mathmaticians even forgot to factor me underrated and hated on but still i made it on |
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Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo this was a pretty basic spit but it was decent. learn to structure ur verses and up the vocab nice drop tho i liked the ending and the way it flowed and wat it meant. nice man
holla back at my open mic THE SICKEST OF SICK
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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IP: 0EB2 26E5
uppin fo feed back
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The Truth
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IP: 5E90 FCE6
Not to bad but work on ur structure,Vocab,and overall flow.
5/10
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