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Old 05-02-04, 07:22 PM   #1
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Psychiatric Evaluation

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**I enter Dr. Taylor's office, nervously taking my seat in his leather-brown arm-chair.**

Dr. Taylor: "Well, I didn't expect to see you until next week.
..................So tell me what troubles you, why did you want to speak?"



**I start talking, almost in a stream of consciousness.**


Exactly what key is death in, the moment my breath..-
Ends its cadence, and regret is the only thing left..-
Leaving a deafening, silence for contemplation..-
I've spent a lifetime struggling, but where's my compensation..-
Save for, a face scarred by personal blemishes..-
Penitence saved for, the grateful souls of the privileged..-
A lost resemblance, the un-dead has no reflection..-
With the pollution I cast, I can pass no inspection..-
I feel like an extra, cast in my own cinema..-
Watching a stranger playing the role I invented..-
It's perfectly fitted, so why am I necessary..-
Why, am I stressed over this when the rest is very..-
Readily apparent, I wake up steady and coherent..-
Wondering if my people's were ready to be my parents..-
I mean, at age 7 my world was gutted and corrupted..-
Pure water was lead laden, that rat shouldn't have touched it..-
So my voice grew smaller, because no one could be trusted..-
Promiscuity grew through me, it's where all my love went..-
Mothafuck the world man, I'm sick of living this life..-
I've pushed everyone away so I can sit here and die..-
The edge of existence, crumbling away like stale bread..-
Falling away by the piece, then stepped on by the unaware..-
My blunders are blatant, they're the cause but who can say..-
With my back to my past, it recurs like boomerang..-



Dr. Taylor: "Well, N-Sight...talk about boomerangs."



Dayum...no help.
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Old 05-02-04, 08:35 PM   #2
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Damn thats good and deep.Nice all together.
8/10
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Old 05-02-04, 08:40 PM   #3
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i felt this piece fam..raw emotion and depth good vocab and wordplay everything flowed great...9/10
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Old 05-02-04, 09:53 PM   #4
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well done

deep piece, it seemed very introspective

it flowed nicely and had good imagery

vocab was definitely your strong point on this
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Old 05-03-04, 12:38 AM   #5
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that is thoughtful and deep.i like it a lot. 9/10
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Old 05-03-04, 07:32 AM   #6
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thanx yo

def. preciate the feedback

holla atcha boyee


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Old 05-04-04, 07:07 AM   #7
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sendin dis back to the top


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Old 05-04-04, 07:30 AM   #8
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Man dis shit is Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeep. Perfect 10 for real.
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Old 05-04-04, 12:09 PM   #9
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'preciate the feedback


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Old 05-05-04, 10:11 AM   #10
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uppin dis piece for more feedback


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Old 05-06-04, 11:20 AM   #11
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uppin whodi

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Old 05-06-04, 11:24 AM   #12
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damn sight
never knew u cud be that deep
9/10 on that piece
u gud dawg!!
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