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Old 05-05-04, 01:17 AM   #1
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this was the first pewice i ever wrote and im not that wack anymore lol

my dads a drugee he fuckin bugs me every day talkin about how he loves me $my dads a fuckin joke $ now that im older i understand y he's broke $ cause he buys so much coke $ sometimes i wish his throat would sweel up causin him 2 choke $ y would i snort coke when i could smoke weed $ 2 top it off he also does speed $ he says it gives him all the energy he needs $ fuck him he's a fagget and i ain't gonna have it $ i remember my mom sayin damnit it's been 2 days and he hasn't showed up yet $ i'd make dumb ass excuses like maybe he doesn't know how 2 drive in the wet $now that i'm older i'm not gonna let him bring me down like that $ sometimes i feel like smashin his face in with a bat $ 4 all the pain he caused me and my mom $ from that we learned how 2 be strong $i learned right from wrong my dads mistakes $ sometimes i wish he would sink 2 the bottom of the lake and never awake
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Old 05-05-04, 05:56 AM   #2
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I ain't even gonna say that this piece is wack because it's so deep. This rhyme sounds like it come from da heart...
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Old 05-05-04, 08:35 AM   #3
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thats deep it was tight but do us all a favor and type it in bars plz
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Old 05-05-04, 10:10 AM   #4
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yo it was the 1st thing i ever wrote so i didnt change anything
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Old 05-05-04, 02:19 PM   #5
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that shit man i was defently feeling that cuz of love when niggas draw there heart out in to there words and thoughts you feel me so defently i gotta say not only some hot shit but some real shit in at the same time
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Old 05-05-04, 06:46 PM   #6
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thanx
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Old 05-05-04, 06:47 PM   #7
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uuuppppppppin leave ur feedback
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