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Old 05-29-04, 04:56 PM   #1
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DeadlyVision Vs mic-wrecker

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10 lines max

quick keystyle.

lets get to it.

3-0=KO.


Blindspit. Check in due:15min after
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Old 05-29-04, 05:30 PM   #2
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aight vision,

look if u askin ME u just another trashy EMCEE//
"lyriclly impared" relyin to beat ME recitin 2pac KAR-E-O-KEE//

dont place ya faith in the PROBABILITY that i'll slack in my rhymin ABILITY//
deadly vision rite? that must mean u c my skillful mosaic turinin u deceased vividly//

yo lyrics like a tiger woods round drasticly under par//
or drasticlly lacking a three digit IQ like ya dumb ass avatar//

nigga ya run of success halts an ends here//
roc this fella(roc-a-fella) an d choke him wit a freeway beard//

im a hungry emcee chompin at the bit//
while vision is jus anotha homo dick rida pacifying himself suckin a dick
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Old 05-29-04, 05:38 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by mic-wrecker
who ready for a battle
who knows u beat me u get klout
who wanna touch mics wit a hungry MC


^^
From Cincinnati? Yo Artificial rhymes are a just weak, stick to FL u just a waste..
I said blindspit and he responded spit 1st? too bad that u still have to 'copy n paste..
Kid u new in EFl? I kill herb, Because am top of the card, this bout no holds barred..
U prewriting it? no wonder yo flow stutter like retards,I leave u mentally scarred..
No one respond to your posts, c'mon noob better the check the OPTOMETRIST..
16-6?Next time you diss, better gain some knowledge or simply REMAIN ANONYMOUS..
Faggot declined my chalange?Consequence will be 150 casualties at the hands of me..
Kido DV I'm Possessed satanically, rhymes are phat, make homo suffer constantly..
Dope? And how the fuck you comparing yoself to Osama when you never murdered?..
In bitchslap he asks for Heavyweightbattle? While his lyrics, full of lies n murmours..


Blah.
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Old 05-29-04, 05:45 PM   #4
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Wow I Woulda Expected A Lot More From This Battle..

Well First Off Neither Of These Spits Had Any Hitting Personals...Punches Were Slight But There..

Mic-Wrecker: 4/10
Your Ish Was Aight, Your Metas Weren't Really That Nice and Your Punches Weren't Hitting. I Didn't Feel Your Verse Much At All....You Need To Up Word-Usuage, Vocab, and Creativite To The Point Where Your Shit Makes Sense.

DeadlyVision: 5/10
Man...Disappointed...Your Punches Weren't Felt Either. You Were Flowing Instead Of Punching. You Had Nice Word-Usuage and Vocab, But Metaphors and Punches Lacked. You Just Spit Enough To Beat Mic-Wrecker Though.

Stay Dope and Elevate

Vote - DeadlyVision

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Old 05-29-04, 05:47 PM   #5
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I didnt really try..lol
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Old 05-30-04, 08:33 AM   #6
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Old 05-30-04, 09:02 AM   #7
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aiight imma break it down like this

deadly vision:
that verse was aiight fam i was feelin it...loved the wordplay personals and flow in this...you also had good structure it was aiight i dont think you had too many personals ...if you did they were just OK...but your shit was aiight i give you

34/50

mic wrecker:

wtf...lmfao i wasnt feelin this at all and i think u need to switch up ur strcture and ur flow was weak..your punches weak personals weak..you could do much better..wat happened

24/50

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Old 05-30-04, 07:34 PM   #8
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Old 05-31-04, 11:17 AM   #9
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look if u askin ME u just another trashy EMCEE//
"lyriclly impared" relyin to beat ME recitin 2pac KAR-E-O-KEE//
6...aight punch but a little stretched in the 2nd line!!
dont place ya faith in the PROBABILITY that i'll slack in my rhymin ABILITY//
deadly vision rite? that must mean u c my skillful mosaic turinin u deceased vividly//
7...nice punch gud multi and vocab!!
yo lyrics like a tiger woods round drasticly under par//
or drasticlly lacking a three digit IQ like ya dumb ass avatar//
6...aight punch, but second line was pretty weak!!
nigga ya run of success halts an ends here//
roc this fella(roc-a-fella) an d choke him wit a freeway beard//
6...nice meta!! gud punch!!
im a hungry emcee chompin at the bit//
while vision is jus anotha homo dick rida pacifying himself suckin a dick
5...weak and homo shit is played!!

From Cincinnati? Yo Artificial rhymes are a just weak, stick to FL u just a waste..
I said blindspit and he responded spit 1st? too bad that u still have to 'copy n paste..
7...nice opener, gud personal!!
Kid u new in EFl? I kill herb, Because am top of the card, this bout no holds barred..
U prewriting it? no wonder yo flow stutter like retards,I leave u mentally scarred..
6...aight but not as gud as ure opener!!
No one respond to your posts, c'mon noob better the check the OPTOMETRIST..
16-6?Next time you diss, better gain some knowledge or simply REMAIN ANONYMOUS..
6...vocab was choppy but i got wat u meant!!
Faggot declined my chalange?Consequence will be 150 casualties at the hands of me..
Kido DV I'm Possessed satanically, rhymes are phat, make homo suffer constantly..
6...homo shit played, but ure punch was better than his!!
Dope? And how the fuck you comparing yoself to Osama when you never murdered?..
In bitchslap he asks for Heavyweightbattle? While his lyrics, full of lies n murmours..
6...pretty average closer!!


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mic-wrecker - 30/50
deadly visionz - 31/50

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Old 05-31-04, 11:59 AM   #10
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mic wrecker - man what was that?...barely any decent punches....stretched lines wich fucked up ur flow....u need better meta's.....and work on ur personals....elevate ur wordplay....this was the worst battle ive seen from you....

deadly - u easily beat his verse...urs was more complex....better multis....better wordplay....way better puncheds....nice spit.....some okay personals....u easily took this....

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Old 05-31-04, 05:05 PM   #11
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Old 05-31-04, 08:38 PM   #12
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okay

DV-you had the better structure in this,ur punches hit harder,and u flowed ight,with a few personels so you had a ok decent verse.....not bad at all man

mic-WRECKER-ur structure was fucked and i wasn't feelin it at all,ur punches hit ok i guess,and u didnt flow all that good,and i did'nt see any personals from what i read......but just work on ur structure,and ur flow dawg and u'd be alright

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Old 06-01-04, 02:53 PM   #13
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up.

1 more fo Ko
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Old 06-02-04, 03:34 PM   #14
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DV - ur struc need improvement but u still had good punches and i liked ur vocab and some of the lines really standed out
MC - damn u need made elevation u should not be battling her ur structure was fucked up also...
easy battlle
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