Yes, As U wished.

I made a new on in Elevated FL because. We both have over 5 wins.


Rulez:

10 lines
Due: 20 min from now.
No show: DQ

blah!!

Goodluck.

We gonna talk about MM Vs Da Army. After we dont with this.

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Checkity......Check....

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check.........................................innn n

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blow yo brains out head,and spit yo lame shit back at u instead..............
u cant think of creativity in yo verse cuz yo vision is dead...............
go 2 msn n chats and work on yo lyrics then come back with better skilling........
yo visions is fake u prolly thought Dp was 4reel when she said u her sexual healer........
da computer a freeze on yo verse it get so embarrased of u acting..............
so go do a new username when i make u disappear like the otha 4 jacksons.........
even yo hippo avatar tellin u 2 leave he waving u 2 get off wit his hand..........
deadly vision beat me???? dass when ali stop shaking and christopher reeves stand......
yo shit need practice,yo open mics not hype,shit is wat MM about.............
i reverse yo verse,cuz da day u beat me is when grand master flash come back out....

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^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk..
I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!"..



^^I'll have a heater crush ya thoughts cuz you winnin this is only in your imagination..
Even P diddy aint FEELIN YA SHIT,when youz sprung off dylon ya MASTERBATION!..
14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...



^^Dont Stay Shocked You Aint Benevelant...
You On A "Strict" "Diet" Of "Gay Men" So Stay On Ya "Read-Ya-Men-t"...
There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”..
You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites..

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Votes Please

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uppin the votes nice drop................................

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punches vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...

personals vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...

metas vison:^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk..
I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!"..

multies vison:There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”..
You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites..

^^^not really multie but somewhat

structure choppa: bars wasnt too stretched

wittiness choppa: his punches didnt hit hard but was funny though

overall i gotta go with deadly vison
peep links

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Huh china.

UppUN

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yo both these were good verses but i was feelin choppa's verse betta

punches choppa had like a 8.5 and deadly had a 8
vocab goes to deadly
flow and structure goes to choppa


vote=choppa city

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^^Playa am sorry to say this but,U have to have 5 wins to vote in here.

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Im sorry, he has five wins.

Vote- Choppa

Eyeronik- your lines were strechted, so next time u say someone has strecthd lines, you have no room to talk. like illtalic said, your quotes suck. you punches were ok, some hit, some missed, flow was below average. wordplay was decent, work on vocab.

Choppa- ok verse, dont put so many ........... , ruins ya struct. ya punches were decent, your wordplay was ok, your flow was nice. your verse had ok personals, as he did also.

well pretty close battle, but since ruth used a masturbation line, choppa wins, if ya didnt use that, it woulda been a tie.

vote- choppa.

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Run!

The Return..

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa uppin dis shit .........

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Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn What HAppened to Elite voters man. Didnt kno it take that long fo people to vote in elevated.

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damn lol choppa i think this was a weak verse from u u could of came alot harder..ur shit was simple a newb could of spit that..it was nice but sum shit did not make sense and i was like huh..and sum shit didnt rhyme

but all in all it was pretty good 5/10

deadly...nice idea on quoting his lines..that shit was sick im feelin dat idea..........ur lines was pretty sick too....nice punches...ok vocab...shit was nice

7/10

vote deadly

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