16 line MAX


no biting/crewvotes dr votes/verse feeding


u spit 1st


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i usually throw no dogz no bones
bitch niggaz got no heart and no chromes
but now ure tryin to dissrespect me
spittin at me with that soft shit
nigga go hard or go home
nigga hes just a pussy with his fathers features (NO)
hes just a PUSSY with his fathers features (OH)
i flow no dissrespect and i show no dissrespect
so really i was open with dissrespect
u wanna get it on clear
mutha fucka u aint strong here
u aint big but you dead wrong here
im mutch kooler than ure ski mask player hater
eat a dick while i get this paper
and ull probably get this one more sooner than later
and dont say whack rappers names its not in ma nature
but is that ure tounge actin serious mr fast and furious
pick pocket with ure bright ideas
u aint no pimp ure a car thieve
so i know u like gone in 60 seconds just like ure career
another second and im done wit em
cant really score no points if the gun hit em
i might aswell have fun wit em
cmon phone a know alot of live niggaz and u aint one of em
what u think that ure a little hot shot
smoke weed and take some fuckin pot shots
little homie i think u better lose the blunt
mutha fucka u have just been bet by a grunt

^^ i said 16 LINE max dawg...ne-way...let's rip dis



First off,

Mothafuck this hoe from Scotland..i'm makin it home of the forgotten..your flow is rotten..-
I dunno what you and Solo got in..but my nigga whupp'd u like slave wit stolen cotton..-
Nigga pushin' my buttons you must be a glutton..my punishment leavin' you gutted..-
Post victory on the door you still couldn't shut-it..ur wack structure is buggin' me like

butt-itch..-
Plus you stinky like plummage..I'm the 6-million figure nigga like Lee Majors..-
Usually, causin' major brain damage..1st time God said oops is when he made YA..-
For what it's worth, ur spits ain't totally worthless..I'm recyclin ur shit into compost piles..-
Breakin' limbs off like tree prunnin'..I toss 'em aside like I stock broke styles..-
Who tha fuck respect ya text..no one cuz ur credibility is in check, u owe-one (0-1)..-
And I'm here to collect ur soul..crack ur chest open to make it flow son..-


Fuck outt huuuuuuuuur

uppin dis for the votes to start rollin in

holla atcha boyee


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Decent battle

Breakdown:
UZI
Took a lil while to get into his shyt, not really offensive initially. Could see what he was trying to do with the repeat lines, but it weren't working for me.
It was okay thru to da middle, I thought things were looking up with the
"im mutch kooler than ure ski mask player hater
eat a dick while i get this paper
and ull probably get this one more sooner than later
and dont say whack rappers names its not in ma nature "
I liked that bit - good wordplay and quite offensive/funny.
But from then on was just okay again. I'm sure this weren't his best spit, showed flashes (or a flash) of class.

N-Sight
Would have preferred you to put it in a 'better' bar structure, cabn't ereally tell if it would have flowed well as an audio... but you got in with good lines a bit earlier than UZI;
"I dunno what you and Solo got in..but my nigga whupp'd u like slave wit stolen cotton..-" - liked it.
Not to mention
"Post victory on the door you still couldn't shut-it
..ur wack structure is buggin' me like butt-itch" - that's what I'm talking about, funny and dismissive of your opponent! That, along with a great flow, is what I look for...
What is "plummage"? Do you mean plumage, as in a bird's feathers (which is pronounced different and therefore wouldn't have rhymed) or plumbing, as in sewers, which is a different word and tehrefore wouldn't rhyme - however you slice it, it don't rhyme!!
Good finish tho -
"Who tha fuck respect ya text..no one cuz ur credibility is in check, u owe-one (0-1)..-
And I'm here to collect ur soul..crack ur chest open to make it flow son..-"

decent finisher

My vote???

N-Sight


One.

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What is "plummage"? Do you mean plumage, as in a bird's feathers (which is pronounced different and therefore wouldn't have rhymed) or plumbing, as in sewers, which is a different word and tehrefore wouldn't rhyme - however you slice it, it don't rhyme!!


^^^ I mean plumbing...but I took creative license and changed the word to plummage...srry if u didn't like it...lol

coo tho

don't forget to vote in the poll

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yeah you right - my bad!!!!! Vote posted.............

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aiight this was a hott battle for n-sight probably one of the best verses i have seen from him....as for uximximus what the hell was that half your bars didnt rhyme no structure no flow no multies no worplday and no punches thats not a verse its a story...n-sight had some hott wordplay and killer punches good multies and a strong flow overrall his verse was better without a doubt

uzimaximus: 1/10

n-sight : 7.5/10

vote: n-sight ...and if anyone votes for uzi thats just a d/r vote lol cause his verse was one of the worst i have seen...but good verse for you nosight ~!1!~

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ya...thanx for the vote of confidence homie


holla atcha boyee

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nigga hes just a pussy with his fathers features (NO)
hes just a PUSSY with his fathers features (OH)

i dont think that line is gonna cut it in here however you got mad potential ur structure was off a bit just preview before you send it and maybe spit it back to a beat just to see if ya can flow it ya know but nice try but my vote goes to -n- he seems more advanced now but elevate than comeback for that rematch aight.....1

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uppin for more feedback abnd votes plz

peep voteon this will ya

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aiyo need some votes please

somebody holla at this thread

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Breakdown...
Uzi:
i usually throw no dogz no bones
bitch niggaz got no heart and no chromes
-wack start.. u rhymed but the shit was wack.

and ur flow wasnt all that good.. work a bit mroe on ur structure and make sure ur punches connect more often..
overall:6.5/10

N-Sight:
Mothafuck this hoe from Scotland..i'm makin it home of the forgotten..your flow is rotten..-
I dunno what you and Solo got in..but my nigga whupp'd u like slave wit stolen cotton..-
-nice multies along wit wordplay.. overall fair start..

ight ur flow was ight.. them multies helpd alot.. u had several good personals and connected punches..
overall:7.5/10
vote-n-sight

aiyo need some votes please

somebody holla at this thread

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