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Old 05-06-04, 06:36 PM   #1
D P G-Unit
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Living in Grey

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She’s right, She’s Wrong, She’s Wrong She’s right
I gotta make a decision but neither seem bright
Can’t live without her, but can she live with me
But Can’t live with her, our friendship to deep
Listens to her friends but then she always come back
Cause my only problem was blazin threw sacks
She my best friend in heart her familys mine too
Can’t live with either option what should I do.
I put in my Lynch tape find my self switching to JOE
So many friends in my life but where do I go
Who do I talk to who’s really real
Then I talk to her cause she know how I feel
She goes threw the same shit why you think we so close
Want to take her and all my stuff and switch over coasts
Start over our life and make her my wife
But then I get thinking is she even right

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The deals on the table, two sides disagreeing on terms
So many negotiators helping who have nothing to earn
Heart saying sign, but brains saying leave
One may be stronger but one has to grieve
She may be perfect for me, is it worth all the costs
And Is loosing this game truly a loss
For a new door to open how many must shut
Will or love make it threw or is it destined for glut
I lay in her arms legs spread round my back
Times moving forward the sky’s turning black
Sun starts to rise, is this my new light
Leave her house feeling like every things right
Talks to her friends they twist her emotions
The cycle continues another demotion
shut the door,now the one in front of me locked
Waited for it to open, felt frustrated and blocked

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So Girl if we just friends why we together in bed
And if you don’t love me now where does this jealousy stem
Does it matter who I’m out with or when I get home
And if we aint sposed to talk why you blow up my phone
Funny now that she’s single you hate her so much
Don’t want her around me, don’t want us to touch
She was always my good friend known her longer than you
Why you trippin now she always been part of my crew
You’re the only person I want, all though she makes sense
You’re the one I love she just part of the rest
New developments come, can’t choose till we find out
All the signs there, you don’t help relieve any doubt
We so young how does this happen to us
Maybe this will help us get over all of the fuss
Were so close but so far and so far were so close
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Old 05-08-04, 02:57 AM   #2
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although this was pretty decent
this belongs in Open Mic
good job though
props on this shit
it was decent
I enjyed half of the read
it got a lil boring in parts though
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Old 05-08-04, 03:56 PM   #3
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This Was Real And I Was Feeling It Cuz I Have A Best Friend Also And He A Male And We Used To Have Feelings For Each Other Too But It Was So Hard Being Together When We Were Best Friends I Didnt Want To Ruin Our Friendship Na Mean We Madd Close Still And I Think This Poem Kinda Relates To What I Was Going Through To So I Liked This Alot
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