this is some shit i did a while ago,taking a break from it recently cos its getting real tiring and theres shit i got to change but here goes...

im britains illest killing machine/bombing the scene/
spiiting so clean after swallowing gallons of windowlene/
with more speed than amphetamines/i'll knock you the fuck out like ten shots of ketamine mixed with mescaline/
i be a rappers dream with a bloodstream of pure gasoline with kerosine mixed up with turpentine/
a cold blooded serpentine/i poisoned fruits for feeding in the garden of eden with adam and eve in/
my shit goes beyond believing/i'll leave you with lesions spitting in a mood colder than twenty below freezing/
i'll burn forests with hundreds of trees in till the oxygen starts depleting then the whole planet just stops breathing/
i'll murder anyone for no reason/i'll even extinquish the sun with one spit so we dont have four seasons/
you best consider extra policing for when im squeezing these weapons to threaten you cretins till bullets start releasing/
murdering my own manuscripts with viscious spits striking like dogfighting misscersmidts(s.i.c.)during the blitz/
i give rappers the shits/with darker spits then when i push the moon in front of the sun for an eclipse/
on stage i come equipt with a microphone cord made of razor wire cutting through necks like laser fire/
if you're a liar then you aint nothing to me/i'll slice your fingers off with the edge of your own cd/
then charge you a fee/just for fucking battling me/
you should take out life insurance when you're rapping with me/
my spit be like hydrochloric acid when i sneeze dissolving your skin like a flesh eating disease/
im an emcee of a raw breed/a lethal pedigree,aint no-one ahead of me in the twentyfirst century/
performing surgical operations on people sent to me like spacecraft piloted by extraterrestrial entities/
confusing you like crop circles/confusing you till your brain stops working and your skin turns purple/
confusing you like the deatomization of your molecular structure through total plutonic reversal/
im not commercial/theres no apology for ripping you into pieces smaller than the latest nanotechnology/
any pieces of you left bodily i'll send to my laboratory which is gone and marked as pathology/
so i can use advanced biology to study properly and diseased anomaly that continues to bother me/
cos like chiropody i get tickled by wack artists who aint honest claiming that they be the hardest/
you just emotionally retarded as promised you'll be running from us like llamas at cricket st thomas/
i plan to graduate from the rap school with honours doing more damage than twenty b52 bombers/
more damage then been dropped in a sea full of pirannhas/waking up armless in hospital suffering traumas/
i rap and make the mic stand up like a snake charmer/a practise more mysterious than the dalai lama/
teaching karma to monks of tibetan order/still separated from china across the border/
the only rap performer who'll record you're slaughter on tape recorder and send copies to your wife and daughter/
face it man,you cant hold the mic with me/stare and try and frighten me in any dumb attempt of out psyching me/
rip off my shit and biting me?/i'll get twisted and start spitting lyrical shit that never existed/
before i said em/spit em and watch your nerves deaden like youve just been exposed to a biological weapon/
you might as well call me armageddon/even the devil ran to heaven trembling and asking for gods protection/
against this emcee of perfection/your word connection is full of more bullshit than a general election/
you might as well draw your pension for a prevention of dissention at any rap convention where im mentioned/
i pack more tension than a middle east peace convention/
more tension than tight suspention/more tension than anal retention/
more tension than the mention of the intervention of ten henchman with bad intentions/
my intentions hostility/with more complex abilities than einsteins theory of relativity/
shocking you with thousands of vaults of electricity for dissing me real visably and fuck simplicity/
my rhymes are convoluted like gravity discovered by issac newton as im lining up rappers for execution/
like russian nobles shooting rasputin/im known for putting the boot in wack motherfuckers who keep refuting/
emcees i'll keep fighting em/microphones i'll keep igniting em/audiences i'll keep hyping em/
in a book depository with my book of rhymes writing em while im busy targeting emcees and sniping em/
spitting deadly venom like a cobra/infecting your persona/sending your ass into a coma/
i'll pull the plug in hospital so your life is over and send you to the morgue to become an organ donor/
i spit a verse from earth and watch it go solar/penetrate the suns corona until it supernovas/
swallowing the first four planets,burning the hydrogen/leaving five planets colder than liquid nitrogen/
my style aint fake/my voice reverberates and breaks tectonic plates and makes em separate/
as earthquakes devestate its too late for prayer/cos i'll be busy ripping holes in the ozone layer/
till the planets got no atmosphere/you're lifes fading and skin baking from ultraviolet radiation/
trailblazing shit thats amazing/running more rings around you then radiocarbonfibredating/
i'll eat any proffesional just like they were edible/
then let my stomach acid burn em like a vegetable/
till they become digestable/take the numbers 14/15/11/and 14 now work that in hexidecimal/
than take away the zeros/and thats what you'll be/
if you ever try and fuck with this viscious emcee/

sorry about the length of the drop,its a bit big...peace....

i forgot to add and crits,good and bad would be appreciated..thanks................

long as hell. i know you couldn't rhyme for a week after that shit. i like how you spuit that shit, but the big words thing isn't that cool anymore. especially when your dealing with a bunch of 13 year olds that don't know what radiocarbonfiber dating is. if i had to rate this peice i'll give it an 8/10. the rhymes were good, the structure was on point, multis were crazy, meta's worked nicley, but the length and big words stopped it from being excellent. keep up the good work.

thanks for your comments,but i aint concerned about whats cool and i certainly aint gonna change to suit youngsters.learn your big words,they'll come in handy with your vocab......but thanks....peace...

no man no. i'm not saying you need to change. i understood your verse perfectly, i just know some other people won't. i've been reading at a college level since 6th grade. you don't have to worry about me. it's other fools that have no will to learn. and about the "what's cool" thing, using too many big words doesn't get you as much of a response now as it did, say 1 1/2 years ago. back then it was teh shit. now everything is different. but don't change homie.

your shit was hot, and its online so the dictionary is only a click away, you'd get mad love spittin a verse like that in a battle