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Old 05-10-04, 10:15 AM   #1
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U dont wanna miss this

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Aight check it
15-20 lines
No d/r, crew hate or unexplained votes
U 1st
Tomorrow 12pm deadline or auto D/Q (im like that)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 05-10-04, 10:17 AM   #2
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Checkin in........................................
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 05-10-04, 10:45 AM   #3
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checkin and dropping.

why am i doing this man/ winning will make me look bad
you can't rap/ but you can't win even if you could, fag!
i've seen your post history/ and there's nothing to impress me
if you spit here like your last battles/ you'll be voted on even less, g
this is not a joking play around type of thing/ you get me?
you could throw five meter square punches/ you still couldn't hit me
think about it holmes/ you had a chance before you had challenged
this ain't your favorite board you go to/ so you can meet other faggots
what type of pussy rhymes for fifteen lines/ and makes it a rule?
obviously your mind ain't running as fast/ as you're thinking it do.
obviously you're not half as intelligent/ as you may believe
i mean/ you decided you'd get an easy win by challenging me
so you can comeback now with that wack shit/ that your penning
i drop you with a simple verse/ and you still have no chance at winning
next time you challenge me/ and think that you'd be the winner
i suggest you take a detour/ to thewackness emergency center
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Old 05-10-04, 10:51 AM   #4
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Talking K.O time

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Aight aight check it 15-20 lines hmm not a problem wit takin this newbie out ha ha...

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Onetwo...how could u...accept my challenge?/
Ur only a newbie...i dont think u'll manage/
I'll knock ur own style...to a pre-newbie/
Afraid to sign on...incase nobody is feelin he/
I would say me but this bitch is too scared of me/
He's like "i-i-i'll challenge u M-M-Mad Dog...BUT PLEASE DONT MAKE ME BLEED"/
"And please dont throw dirt on my name"/
"Coz momma'll go mad...wrong she'll go insane"/
"And beat my ass till i got half of a membrane"/
"So if i choke...will u accept my defeat in vain?"/
Huh y u beggin and pleadin onetwo ur ass is decievin/
So ima start shootin...hopefully u'll stop breathin/
And if u dont stop...then there's gonna be a consequence/
We may have to rematch...then yo ass is gonna jump the fence/ (Run away)
How can u change the rap game...u cant hit punchlines POW!/
Oh u agree wit me.../
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Originally Posted by onetwo
i doubt i'd make it too much different from now

Some of yo rhymes dont even rhyme thats embarrassing/
Take a lesson from yo OWN book...stop battlin its harrassin/
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 05-10-04, 11:23 AM   #5
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hot battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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Old 05-10-04, 11:24 AM   #6
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whut set up one with me hollaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Old 05-10-04, 02:47 PM   #7
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uppin. #1 plesae don't make me have to do this shit again.
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Old 05-10-04, 08:10 PM   #8
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yo both came hard on this but ya'll both need some vocab, that was some simple shit and 1,2 your stucture made your shit not even rhyme, good intensity both but ya'll need to get better. mad dog's punches made actually made some sence and could go along with it, other cat u aint got any flow wit the way u structuring it.
vote-maddog

oh and ya'll need some wordplay.
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Old 05-10-04, 08:11 PM   #9
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yo that was an honest vote hit this battle back wit a vote, or the one in my signiture
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351
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Old 05-10-04, 11:51 PM   #10
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aiight since i have to explain my structure... look i set my bars up like this. i learned it from teh illest at another site.
set-up/ opener to the rhyme
set up/ closer to the rhyme
or is the way that you structure shit so much better? show me.
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Old 05-10-04, 11:56 PM   #11
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Mad Dog won.
i was trying to figue out onetwo's style and couldn't so i think maddog won. better everything from what i could tell.
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Old 05-11-04, 12:03 AM   #12
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^^ the illest on the other site will be the weakest on this site
because it almost made it confusinf
it doesnt matter though
because Madd Dog still got this
v/Madd dog
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123432
hit that shit up
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Old 05-11-04, 12:17 AM   #13
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what the fuck was that? niether vote was explained. ya'll just saying the same shit the first voter said. get fucking creative. try to actually read the damn posts. try to actually explain why "Madd Dog still got this" get fucking real man.
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Old 05-11-04, 05:42 AM   #14
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Uppin#1
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Quote:
Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

Quote:
Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 05-11-04, 08:41 AM   #15
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uppin#2
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

Quote:
Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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