Listen, old Ancient of Days...

My ways were early despised, thundering skies of Zion..-
Clapped with praise, my breast-plate flashed its diamonds..-
Revealing a deity, self-embraced and supreme..-
But I was the 'trump of heaven, the one who changed the scene..-
The change, seemed masterful if not blasphemous..-
The change was seen, hazardous 'til you cast the last of us..-
Into the Sea of Acheron, I came back to harm..-
Adam and Eve were slack, so I could attack with charm..-
Then you locked the garden, and I devised all evil..-
False religion as cuisine, fixed plenty for all people..-
My purpose was ever, determined to severe ties..-
Was ever, I the servant pleasant in your eyes..-
I surmise never, but has heard heaven's crimes..-
If we compare records, I'd say that the world is mine..-
My evidence, let's examine the past two centuries..-
About 20 wars and famine, the black-man dependence scheme..-
Racial lynching was a cinch, homosexual tendencies..-
Loan extortion and abortion, sole drug dependency..-
All the work of my hands, its time I rise up to rule..-
Who the hell is better at cooking lies up to fool..-


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uppin dis piece for feedback

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i was feelin that, the vocab was tight but ya conversions need a little work but it was good over all check out mine HERE WE GO AGAIN
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N-Sight, I was feeling that for real, playa. Subject matter was a breath of fresh air, I like the idea of Satan trying to justify hinself to God... of course he can't really justify it, but THAT talk is for The Christian Message Board, not the hip hop one!!

Nice drop, tho, 4 real.

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^^^ preciate dat dawg...this is for a collabo on another site...my patna is going to be GOD...

I plan on tweakin this a lil...work out the kinks in the flow...

preciate the feed back dawg


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God's always a good partner to have (oops! Here I go again!!!)

Peace

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"Strong Lyrics, Never Die Like Gimmicks; Once You've Got the Dope Rhymes Then The Sky's The Limit"

Dat was hot. Interesting theme but you still pulled it off.
Lookin forward to seein the finished collab...

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