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JSmoove 0 0%
Kryogenix 5 100.00%
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Old 05-10-04, 01:20 PM   #1
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Kryogenix vs. JSmoove

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a quick 10 lines
and no cheating bullshit
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Old 05-10-04, 01:25 PM   #2
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Use your pension to retire cause you have no comprehension/
You and I are lyrically worlds apart, I'm in another dimension/
Not to mention, you're just an extension of my failed invention/
To create another like me, in the diction that can only be fiction/
Now listen, You thought cause I was quiet that I had nothing to say/
Now, I'm auctioning off your style like leftovers on EBay
Next time you pick up a mic and wanna go outside to play/
I guarantee you won't scream challenge my way...
 
Old 05-10-04, 01:48 PM   #3
JSmoove
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I guess I was rhyming to myself...I need to sing a lullaby and put myself to sleep.
 
Old 05-10-04, 01:56 PM   #4
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Is this whole world full of idiots? read the rules,10 lines Bro
So all I have is 1 question left, are you dumb,stupid or slow?
Some advice, dont rap..dont even pick up a mic..just STOP
Cause truth be told.....you suck like sluts at truck stops
And, you dont have to sing to put yourself to sleep
Cause I got that fire that'll put you in a coma for a week
No effort at all in this battle, cause who the hell is JSmoove?
This kid's beiggest climb to success, is a can of Moutain Dew
Me rude?, naw, I just shout out of nowhere and lash out
Almost thought you was gay, the way you came in this battle, ASS OUT!
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Old 05-10-04, 02:23 PM   #5
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uppin this shit for some votes
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Old 05-10-04, 02:32 PM   #6
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Nice...nice indeed. Now that the fire's lit...you had more than 1 hour to spit. I'll see you later on the battlefield. Next time...I'm playing for keeps....
 
Old 05-10-04, 04:55 PM   #7
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uppin for some votes
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Old 05-10-04, 09:39 PM   #8
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uppin for some votes on this shit
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Old 05-10-04, 09:52 PM   #9
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kryogenix, you had a couple funny lines...keep the self glorification lines out...dont use any ever.

Other than that, you had the mountain dew line...and I laughed at that one. Thats classic.

Other guy...well...your suppost to diss him...not write a song.

Elevate JSmoove

V/kryo
 
Old 05-11-04, 02:53 AM   #10
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uupin for some more votes so I can merk this kid..
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Old 05-11-04, 03:22 AM   #11
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well before i drink some more ima vote cause this was funny

j smoove- yeah if you didnt suck you mighta had a better chance cause kryo's verse wouldnt have been as true, but as it is, yeah well ya had the one ebay line other than that... nah u suck (like sluts at truck stops) haha, nah for real though you really do suck. multis and vocab are fine but ya gotta incorporate them shits in a battle cerse not a fuckin lullaby or whatever the fuck you was tryin ta do. punches man, thats where its at

kryo u a funny motha fucka, aside from ya closer ya shit was hot even if it did seem ya only spent 10 minutes on it, last line seemed kinda stretched mighta just been the last comma or somethin but i had ta read it twice, ya had punches though and ya kinda need those in a battle (hint for the other guy) nice verse, i laughed, i might not have sober but i did so you won
 
Old 05-11-04, 04:09 AM   #12
Da Vinci
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RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874

J nice drop you came hard there with some big punches try to flow a little more but no complaints that was a nice drop.
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 6/10
Overall: 37/60

Kryo, nice drop after I read his shit I was thinking "this kid is gonna need to come hard" you did, your shit was funny, flowed and had solid big punches almost the whole way through.

Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 7/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 40/60
Vote: Kryo, had a few more punches and personals
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Old 05-11-04, 12:11 PM   #13
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LOL THIS BATTLES A JOKE.. SO FAR KYRO IS THA ONLY EMCEE THAT HAS SUM FUCKIN EXPERIENCE.. NO ONE ELSE UNDERSTAND WAT A PUNCHLINE IS... GOOD SHIT KRYO.. I CAN TELL U AINT EVEN UT EFFORT INTO BEATIN THAT TRASH ASS NIGGA..

VOTE.. KRYO..

RETURN THA FAV FAM...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123609
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Old 05-11-04, 12:41 PM   #14
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^^yes
thats why the kids on this site are idiots
they think battle records mean everything
this is the most Ive battled in months
but, this just shows I still got it
uppin for some more votes
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Old 05-11-04, 08:36 PM   #15
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Use your pension to retire cause you have no comprehension/
You and I are lyrically worlds apart, I'm in another dimension/
^Nice Multies' ... 7/10

Not to mention, you're just an extension of my failed invention/
To create another like me, in the diction that can only be fiction/
^Alright.. Good Punch..!! & Multies.. 8/10

Now listen, You thought cause I was quiet that I had nothing to say/
Now, I'm auctioning off your style like leftovers on EBay
Next time you pick up a mic and wanna go outside to play/
I guarantee you won't scream challenge my way...
^But You Fell Off Towards The End.. Of Your Verse!! 9/20

Checckit Checck Kryo:

Is this whole world full of idiots? read the rules,10 lines Bro
So all I have is 1 question left, are you dumb,stupid or slow?
^Lmfao Nice Opener' .. 10/10

No effort at all in this battle, cause who the hell is JSmoove?
This kid's beiggest climb to success, is a can of Moutain Dew
^Nice Punch.. 7/10

Me rude?, naw, I just shout out of nowhere and lash out
Almost thought you was gay, the way you came in this battle, ASS OUT!
^And Nice Closer' ... 9/10 ..


Vote: Kryo' ...

Battle Is Over With!!!!
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