the rulez are in the front linez
u up first
and 8 barz (if you didnt rememer)
you should know the rest...

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Even if I spit first/ I'll still drop a sick verse/ on a bitch ass thief/
Who wants to start beef/ I'll grab the pliers and one by one, pull out your teeth/
My torture methods vary/ my techniques scary/
But my flow will cripple you like voice of Mariah Carey/
I'm beating a cheater/ I’ll slice him up like the scythe of the grim reaper/
My shits deeper/ than the ocean/ what's with all the commotion/ stop boasting/
About your flows/ cause you either won from cheating or no shows/
You PM'd the wrong guy/ you want to know why?/ cause I’m going to expose you for the bitch you deny/ if I had a car/ I’d do a drive by/ I’ll fry/ your brain and break your body frame/ its beyond a game/
You’re to blame/ the very same hater who tried to cheat his way to fame/
I've never seen an emcee as weak as phisyque/ this shit's hit the fan/ your win records a sham/
You’re no veteran/ everyone watch as I shatter him/ and take his mic away so the nigga can't come back as a fucked up gay.

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Mr MC ill kill you Verbally wit more linez den Surgery datz Extended into a Hyperbole, im tellin you now there'z no MC that'll ever Murder Me/(hyperbole=Exaggeration)
Ya Bone Decay Lackz Frame, shoot ya chest and make ya Back Drain/
Punchin out ya lifeline and leave you wit no Feelingz from thiz Max Payne/
You dont know when to Drop Hard you just be Varryin Errectionz/
Im Carryin Protection, Thatll have ya Intestinez on da ground like misshandled Cesarian Sectionz/
My Text iz waitin, ill Infect the Nation, while ya insidez still degradin/
Ill Peel ya Face in, to stop you from seein the finish line while we Racin/
Ill flame ya Pectoralz till ya Heart filled wit Heat, you still get Beat/
I can put them Tekz to Sleep, like Trigger Lockz when you Rep Phisyque/
Youll neva "Ammount to Shit" even if ya verse wuz covered in Manure/
After bein thrown in a Sewer and Piled up in ya Computer and logged in as a User/
When i rip ya Brain Particalz out you wont be able to Think Twice about how i Sport Ya Glandz/
Cuz i wont regret how i Spray up ya house more than the "Orkin Man"/

had to rush it
had SOL'z to do

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Yo, This was a decent battle, both came tight...Mc Murder, this is one of the better verses you've posted..some of the lines you posted seemd a bit too long and ran on...took away from the flow...

Phys- That was a nice verse, That Cecerian Line was Dope....You had a consistant flow and a nice formatt. easy to read....

Good battle..
Vote= Phisyque

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But my vote, dont count, so what the fuck do I know, Phys- you coulda chalkd up one....Oh well still a good battle.
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A'ight...this was a weak battle...Mc murder...your verse was garbage. Your punches was played, your multies didn't even werk out...elevate a lot dawg. Physique...your verse was a'ight but not great. But, you coulda spit worse and still merk'd this kid. No hate, just honest opinion.

Vote- Physique

A'ight return tha favor and hit this up...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123889

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Here's what i got to say as far as MC Murder goes...

Opening: weak, you should start off with something strong to get the reader's attention, your opening was very plain and basic

Flow: The only thing you did hear was make everything rhyme but in my opinion the rhyme didnt really flow that well.

Vocab: Basic

Punches: I think thats your biggest problem. You didnt have one punchline in this whole rhyme and if you did it wasnt good enough to recognize as one. Punches are what you need in battles to defeat your opponenet. Get some practice doing this.

Closing: Basic, nothing caught my attention.

Here's my comments on Phisyque:

Opening: Very good punchline opener with the hyperbole.

Flow: Overall flow was good, every was put together well and I liked it.

Vocab: I thought your vocab was good but i didnt understand a couple of your lines. U got a canibus rhyme style in my opinion which works.

Closing: The Orkin Man line was good... i would've expected better but I liked that line with the flow.

Vote: Phisyque

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Sorry I cant vote in the poll, I don't have enough posts to do that yet, i hope my vote can still count

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Decent battle but Ill have to go with Physique.
Vote= Physique