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Old 05-18-04, 10:47 PM   #1
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Old 05-18-04, 11:00 PM   #2
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Umm................Beat is good, but u cant keep up wit the tempo.......flow is choppy. the rest was ok.

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Old 05-23-04, 11:07 AM   #3
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not feeling the track on the page, I think U need mad work with the flow mainly....keeep posting though, just step up on the flow. It would prolly help you if U memorized your lyrics cause it seems like U reading em or sumthin, U know....if U just had em in your head then U could concertrate on the flow


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