12 lines max
1 post
no crew votes
deadline half an hour

check in man

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darkness, is in pitch blackness to blinde to see where he's going leading himself unseeing a wooden door/
im poisoness like carbon dioxide, uncreasing your health making you unstable/
im able to nail you in one second without you even blinking/
give you a drink full of acid, looking at me saying it was fantastic./
force feed you some more listnin to your lungs choking decintergrated you/
this is all true in fact, even gave you extacy tabletts as a matter of fact/
i'll kick you away like andy cole scoring for blackburn, make a giant hole in ur rectum/
put both legs stumped in the ground till you need to be charged to get out/
im like mike tyson beatin you up in a fight out./
with rage seeking victory making you a short story/
your getting killed off the scene, like you never exsted or seen/
my words are meaning to cover you up, like they blame you for being the suspect/
this guys just a dick head, wid no means and lifeless/

Been here since the beggining, and no one thinks i'm special
I murk from the sinning - and clot up mind's 'Blood-Vessels'.
Fuck your beliefs, i'll demolish your whole crew
Like schools without the D.A.R.E program - We're all using you.
Today at 10:42 you got your ass raped by a pair of "shifty Fingers"
so im sitting here wondering why your ass stecnch still lingers
this cats wack.....you can measure his wackness on a scall from 1-10
On may fourth 2004.....you got sonned by a wack cat named Hexen

blah only need 8 lines for this fool

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yo man if the line max is 12 then why you got 13 lines?

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the 5th 7th and 8th line are personals

7thline is his record....1 win 10 losses

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hhahhahaha...it was wack until I read blacks shyt...hahaha...aight find mind...u suck...
ur record is fucken 1-10 and who'd u beat????ahaha..it's coo though ur gonna get better hopefully..aight here's wut i think

spit: black
punch:black
personals:black
flow:blak

aight dawg...this is to u find mind...ur suppost to use punch against da other person..like da whole time during ur spit u only talked about ur self and how u'd kill him but nuthin funny...u should practice on that alot...

aight dawg..this is to u my nigga black..lolz...ur shyt was funny..we're u even trying..na i don't think so...well jst work on ur personals a bit more and make it more funny for me to laught...lolz

vote black

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This battle was fuckin wack fellaz. Waz both yall high on some other shit doin this. Black at least your shit rhymed and made sense. Fine mind change your name. Wit that flow your mind ain't fine at all. That could possibly be tha worst verse i've ever seen. No kinda rhyme scheme at all. Come on dogz step it up.

vote=black
swing thru here fellaz and see a battle for real
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378

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i vote Black Hes Ryhmed More...
Other Was Kinda Bad.... He Needs =
Vote - Black

haha you guys thought i was seruouse with this clown.....im not gunna waste nething special on this cat when i gotta battle accomplishment later 2nite....his rec is 33-11 100 times better then this kats

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k fine mind has good vocab, but does not make much sense. when he attempts to drop punches, they are often played out. you are promising emcee, but you need to rhyme and flow more. learn when to use the elevated vocabulary....no offense...but weak verse....

Been here since the beggining, and no one thinks i'm special
I murk from the sinning - and clot up mind's 'Blood-Vessels'. ok......
Fuck your beliefs, i'll demolish your whole crew
Like schools without the D.A.R.E program - We're all using you. don´t make much sense to me....it might be my noobness
Today at 10:42 you got your ass raped by a pair of "shifty Fingers"
so im sitting here wondering why your ass stecnch still lingers meh....
this cats wack.....you can measure his wackness on a scall from 1-10
On may fourth 2004.....you got sonned by a wack cat named Hexen meh...........

no offense...sort of a wack battle, but black takes this easily for harder punches....at least he had better ones than fine mind......and he knows when to use his vocab....therefore, I vote for black...

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