yo no rules just spit it


gip = hash89 = niknag3990 = DQ'ed for cheating

ill go first

theres gotta be rules man/chick.
10-16 lines
no cheating.. no biting no hate votes..etc..

ok so u call yer self the jacket
well ima take these words and lyricly attack ya
i dont know y u even try dog u aint in my league
im a spit these rymes till u die dog without any signs of fatigue
ill cause u to go insane and be put in a pysciatric ward
walk through the door and hit ya with a 2x4 board
that aint ya dick its a fuckin ambilical cord
u couldnt tell tha difference cuz u aint neva had a dick before
i think that i proved with this ryme right here that im tha masta
cuz i used these words to hit u ova the head and smash ya

were u at homie hope u aint chokin

u probly gettin some prewritten shit ready huh

yo this little gip bitch thinks she can run this shit.
but its really me runnin when she shows her tits.
cuz shes so damn nasty im gettin gaggin reflex.
im just glad this battle isnt on stage, but in text.
cuz i plan on rippin you bitch like im tearin toilet tissue.
and stick you up my ass, fold you in half, and flick you.
and flush you down the toilet right in through to the pipes.
and eliminate your ass like the shitty raps that you write.
cuz your just not strong enough, your rhymes is to weak and mushy.
and i bet your name gip, stands for G.ee I.m P.ussy.
dont even try to run shit, you'll get flattend like dough.
and all your bones gonna crunch like im chewin oreos.
and you just dont got the look, look yo fat ripped yo blouse.
and since your such a fuckin dork, i guess i'll call you Milhouse. (gip is from Springfield)
so heres my suggestion, for you to always remember.
If you ever even think you got some shit, put that shit in the blender.

lets get some votes on this shit!

ok heres the breakdown

jaket- u had good punches and a good rhyme scheme but one major problem...gip is a guy not a girl i think that could cost u since it was based on that

gip-ur punches were good i see u elevatin and the rhyme scheme was aight keep an eye on that next time

vote-gip

i give a crap who gip is. gip sounds like a female to me, and rhymes like one.

Jackets flows were definitely hotter, even if GIP is a guy. It don't matter. His shit was still the best. My vote goes to Jacket.

lets get some votes on this battle. read each of our stuff and vote for who's you think is better.

*breakdown*

Jacket

Flow 8/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Total 31/40

Gip

Flow 5/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Total 22/40

as ya can see ma vote goes to ma nigga jacket na mean he lead in eveything at least dats ma opinion na mean good battle tho fellaz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Jacket won this easy I didn't even understand Gip...

Punches ~ Jacket
Flow ~ Jacket
Creativity ~ Jacket
Vocab ~ Jacket

yo uppin for votes..help me put an end to this bitch