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40CaliberHitz | 5 | 100.00% | |
C-Quence | 0 | 0% | |
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05-23-04, 07:42 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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*40Hitz "CoRpSMaN" Vs C-Quence*
IP: C1DA C961
10-15 lines
No Crew or Hate Votes No Dick/Ryderz Explain All Votes Good Luck C-Quence spitten first!
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05-23-04, 08:05 PM | #2 | |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
C-Quence spit first, with death thirst, ill eat 40 Calibers
ya battle verse comin up is left worse, seat ya style werds ya cant fuck with me, im a king of rhythmic-process Corpsman is like bologna, a sting of stingint losses ya made of nuthin man, i own you and all ya bosses i created heaven and earth, ya worship me wearin crosses you got something better, show me, im waiting-for-new itll prolly be something ive heard, your just waiting-for-cue get a clue youve gone against tha wrong person my lyrics will make you blue, and i havnt started merkin im being easy right now, i could kill you in Alliteration youd fumble words like dumbo turds in Foreign Nations i crumble MC's like you prophetically like i diss Miss Cleo my rumbles heard everywhere ill eat you like LiL Nemo my rhyme will make you bloated u need prescribed Beeno i can twist ya spine, get ya soaked, turn you out to be zero srry yo, its 16 lines |
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05-23-04, 08:18 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C1DA C961
C-Quence ur not popular and throwing 'paper into rotating propellers' wont get u a 'fan-page'//
---------lol-----pause-----ok lets go............ I roll with savage factions that peruse with ravage actions to flip on any mc// The average facts son show that ur tossing senseless disses like throwing pennies at me// U’r better off not showing cause like ‘freestyles in the park’ I’m ‘out flowing’ u at ease// Fuck a gun…I'll toss you 'drinks from the bar' just to have 'shots' thrown at your knees// Watch your life growing seize the moment that my finger gives the trigger a squeeze// My vigor keys will defeat you…and that’s easier to see then spotting a nigger in Queens// ------ok-----really though....lets go------- C’mon C-Quence don’t be scurred of me =)…consider me as one of your best friends=)// The one that’ll backstab you with red pens just to meet amends when the stress ends// I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out rewriting ur scripts// I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods uniting with Cryps// I’m inciting this bitch… Your rhymes are about as real as blind people claiming that ufo sightings exist// So good at cutting mc’s in half that most claim that I’m simply exciting with snips// I’d carve out ur insides it’s a beautiful site…in battles u couldn’t smoke me using a pipe// Using ur might to beat up Jordan is the only way u can claim to be abusing the Mic// Striving to glow…I read your Lyrics and you should consider reviving your flow// I’m conniving this ho…as Quence and winning don’t go like scuba diving in snow!!!!!!!
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05-23-04, 08:21 PM | #4 | |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
lol good shit 40, lmao,
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05-23-04, 09:13 PM | #5 | |
Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: 8A1D B942
ok break down
quence ya opener umm started off with goodword play then the punchs was weak tha death thirs and 40 calibers was tight punch was weak though your closer again nice wordplay in the firs line but the punch was weak and the rest of your verse was basic kinda wad some nice wordplay not really any good punchs to me maybe i couple i seen was nice brah just try workin on better punchlines u got nice set ups but the punch never really hits to me got potental though just need to work on ya punchs an personals 40 cal before the pause was some sick shit an then the opener was stretched but still decent shit nice wordplay an shit your closer was ight nothin that great in there some multies and a decent punch and the rest of your verse was pretty creative metas some pretty nice punchs to but just work on your structure everything else was pretty nice vote 40 cal nice battle by both
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05-25-04, 01:51 PM | #6 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
calibur won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.
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05-25-04, 02:09 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3A20 2661
C’mon C-Quence don’t be scurred of me =)…consider me as one of your best friends=)//
The one that’ll backstab you with red pens just to meet amends when the stress ends// I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out rewriting ur scripts// I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods uniting with Cryps// I’m inciting this bitch… Your rhymes are about as real as blind people claiming that ufo sightings exist// So good at cutting mc’s in half that most claim that I’m simply exciting with snips// ^^^ Loved thiz part had me laughin out in clazz. and i almost got sent to the office. it wuz nice all the way through. C your verse wuz nice good punchez but didnt stay as consistent but overall you did pretty good. what i think iz your best line wuz im being easy right now, i could kill you in Alliteration youd fumble words like dumbo turds in Foreign Nations but the vote still goes to 40 Vote 40
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05-25-04, 05:12 PM | #8 | |
New to RB
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IP: 3275 1019
40 Won This Cuz His Flow Was On Point And His Punches Were Better, Overall He Was just Better Than C-Quence, But Ya Had Not bad punches either just need to sort that shit and have more consistant punches
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05-25-04, 05:18 PM | #9 | |
Light Weight
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IP: D70D A460
Punches-40 (had it on lockk)
Flow-C (some lines didnt rhyme but u still deserve at least 1 category for tryin lol) Multis-40 (C had none) opener-40 (no comparison) closer-40 (no comparision) personals-tie (not many) wordplay-40 (jus str8 murder, da w/p was str8 witty) overall-40 Not really any contest here....
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