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40CaliberHitz 5 100.00%
C-Quence 0 0%
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Old 05-23-04, 07:42 PM   #1
40CaliberHitz
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*40Hitz "CoRpSMaN" Vs C-Quence*

IP: C1DA C961

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Good Luck C-Quence spitten first!
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Old 05-23-04, 08:05 PM   #2
C-Quence
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C-Quence spit first, with death thirst, ill eat 40 Calibers
ya battle verse comin up is left worse, seat ya style werds
ya cant fuck with me, im a king of rhythmic-process
Corpsman is like bologna, a sting of stingint losses
ya made of nuthin man, i own you and all ya bosses
i created heaven and earth, ya worship me wearin crosses
you got something better, show me, im waiting-for-new
itll prolly be something ive heard, your just waiting-for-cue
get a clue youve gone against tha wrong person
my lyrics will make you blue, and i havnt started merkin
im being easy right now, i could kill you in Alliteration
youd fumble words like dumbo turds in Foreign Nations
i crumble MC's like you prophetically like i diss Miss Cleo
my rumbles heard everywhere ill eat you like LiL Nemo
my rhyme will make you bloated u need prescribed Beeno
i can twist ya spine, get ya soaked, turn you out to be zero


srry yo, its 16 lines
 
Old 05-23-04, 08:18 PM   #3
40CaliberHitz
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C-Quence ur not popular and throwing 'paper into rotating propellers' wont get u a 'fan-page'//
---------lol-----pause-----ok lets go............
I roll with savage factions that peruse with ravage actions to flip on any mc//
The average facts son show that ur tossing senseless disses like throwing pennies at me//
U’r better off not showing cause like ‘freestyles in the park’ I’m ‘out flowing’ u at ease//
Fuck a gun…I'll toss you 'drinks from the bar' just to have 'shots' thrown at your knees//
Watch your life growing seize the moment that my finger gives the trigger a squeeze//
My vigor keys will defeat you…and that’s easier to see then spotting a nigger in Queens//
------ok-----really though....lets go-------
C’mon C-Quence don’t be scurred of me =)…consider me as one of your best friends=)//
The one that’ll backstab you with red pens just to meet amends when the stress ends//
I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out rewriting ur scripts//
I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods uniting with Cryps//
I’m inciting this bitch…
Your rhymes are about as real as blind people claiming that ufo sightings exist//
So good at cutting mc’s in half that most claim that I’m simply exciting with snips//
I’d carve out ur insides it’s a beautiful site…in battles u couldn’t smoke me using a pipe//
Using ur might to beat up Jordan is the only way u can claim to be abusing the Mic//
Striving to glow…I read your Lyrics and you should consider reviving your flow//
I’m conniving this ho…as Quence and winning don’t go like scuba diving in snow!!!!!!!
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Old 05-23-04, 08:21 PM   #4
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lol good shit 40, lmao,
 
Old 05-23-04, 09:13 PM   #5
E Looch
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ok break down

quence ya opener umm started off with goodword play then the punchs was weak tha death thirs and 40 calibers was tight punch was weak though your closer again nice wordplay in the firs line but the punch was weak and the rest of your verse was basic kinda wad some nice wordplay not really any good punchs to me maybe i couple i seen was nice brah just try workin on better punchlines u got nice set ups but the punch never really hits to me got potental though just need to work on ya punchs an personals

40 cal before the pause was some sick shit an then the opener was stretched but still decent shit nice wordplay an shit your closer was ight nothin that great in there some multies and a decent punch and the rest of your verse was pretty creative metas some pretty nice punchs to but just work on your structure everything else was pretty nice

vote 40 cal

nice battle by both
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Old 05-25-04, 01:51 PM   #6
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calibur won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.
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Old 05-25-04, 02:09 PM   #7
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C’mon C-Quence don’t be scurred of me =)…consider me as one of your best friends=)//
The one that’ll backstab you with red pens just to meet amends when the stress ends//
I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out rewriting ur scripts//
I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods uniting with Cryps//
I’m inciting this bitch…
Your rhymes are about as real as blind people claiming that ufo sightings exist//
So good at cutting mc’s in half that most claim that I’m simply exciting with snips//
^^^
Loved thiz part had me laughin out in clazz. and i almost got sent to the office.
it wuz nice all the way through.

C
your verse wuz nice good punchez but didnt stay as consistent but overall you did pretty good.
what i think iz your best line wuz
im being easy right now, i could kill you in Alliteration
youd fumble words like dumbo turds in Foreign Nations

but the vote still goes to 40

Vote 40
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Old 05-25-04, 05:12 PM   #8
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40 Won This Cuz His Flow Was On Point And His Punches Were Better, Overall He Was just Better Than C-Quence, But Ya Had Not bad punches either just need to sort that shit and have more consistant punches
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Old 05-25-04, 05:18 PM   #9
*Tay.G*SinCity*
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Punches-40 (had it on lockk)
Flow-C (some lines didnt rhyme but u still deserve at least 1 category for tryin lol)
Multis-40 (C had none)
opener-40 (no comparison)
closer-40 (no comparision)
personals-tie (not many)
wordplay-40 (jus str8 murder, da w/p was str8 witty)
overall-40

Not really any contest here....
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