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at my will-i-hurry,da kill-n-bury and since u "N-Sight"[in sight] sum sh0ts g0ne-flurry//--1
leave u wit m0re "h0les" den "Ritz Crackerz"//--2
and u "Spit S0 Much Crap",ur n0t a lyricist ya juzt a "Shit Stacker"//--3
really i d0nt need da click-clacker,juzt barz-n-punchez//--4
and i'll still leave u in a "B0x L0cked" but i d0nt mean "Packed Lunchez"//--5
i see ya lyrics "C0me Up Sh0rt" like "Munchkins N Dwarfs"//--6
ya Punches-b0re wit "N0 P0wer" s0 where is da "s0urce"?//--7
spitN da get a sp0t in R0yaL-SiCknEsS//--8
and imma k0ntinue ta spit "Hot" even if i d0nt get a sp0t i'll still B0iL-BitCheZ//--9
see da difference between "SiGhT-n-Cream",iz i "SeE M0ney"... and him??...itz 0nly a dream//--10


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Awwww,

Cream is Cinderella tryna slip in our crew..like it was a glass slipper..-
But it's 'clear' our 'shoes' are too big to fit him..becuz kid is NOT a winner..-
Let the 'record' show his potential..kid gets 'Creamed' in every event..-
Only time he looks down on his opponent is when he peeps the arial pic..-
Niggas "F" him like dat stereo shit..so fuck him I don't even respect him..-
Electromagnetic waves hit my sight..ur not even in N-Sights Spectrum..-
Plug ur rectum..you've dropped enough 'shit' for the Sanitation Commission..-
Ur 'infant style' is 'infantile'..ur are NOT grown enough for this mission..-
Listen, ur just a Georgia Peach I was born to beat..kid, u bore me to sleep..-
How u 'hustle for pesos' and can't afford to eat..u 'herb just adorn the beef'..-

Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuur

ok this is one of the easiest battles to vote in

plain and simple n-sight killed CREAM

CREAM
dude u had no structure whatsoeva, some lines were short, some were stretched and that really fucked up ure flow which was barely there. u know ure wordplay was aight but fucked up in places, drop the "" cuz it just makes u look like a newb, just like the // at the end of ure lines. u lacked in creativity and ure punches were forced some of them and personals u lacked in to.
N-SIGHT
playa, u had some tight structure goin on and a nice flow to ure spit. u to shud drop the ..- at the end of ure lines unless u think ure still a newb. u had punches in ure spit that were hittin hard but some were off. u had some nice personals in there to and that is what wins battles.

V/ - N-Sight

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im gonna have to say n sight murdered cream :

N-sight did very good in everything in this postion simple 45/50

Now for cream u need to work on some things lik structure that was crazy .you had ok wordplay but.some good punchline but u needed to bring AAA game to beat him and u did not beat him

Vote=Ni

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N-Sight = 24/40
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

Cream = 22/40
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 5/10
.:N-Sight:. got this one...kinda had better punches in there and structure..good battle though...

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wow..n-sight..u pretty good..aight

spit: n
punch:n
multi: cream
flow: n

basicly n-sight had more punch then cream...this was a good battle..also pretty evenly matched...you guys are pretty good also...i don't think u guys need ta get betta wit nething...jst that n had better punch k

punch: N

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opener-N
closer-N
punches-N
personals-N
structure-N
creativity-N
enjoyment-N


N's best lines

Cream is Cinderella tryna slip in our crew..like it was a glass slipper..-
But it's 'clear' our 'shoes' are too big to fit him..becuz kid is NOT a winner..-
Let the 'record' show his potential..kid gets 'Creamed' in every event..-
Only time he looks down on his opponent is when he peeps the arial pic..-
Niggas "F" him like dat stereo shit..so fuck him I don't even respect him..-
Electromagnetic waves hit my sight..ur not even in N-Sights Spectrum..-
Plug ur rectum..you've dropped enough 'shit' for the Sanitation Commission..-
Ur 'infant style' is 'infantile'..ur are NOT grown enough for this mission..-
Listen, ur just a Georgia Peach I was born to beat..kid, u bore me to sleep..-
How u 'hustle for pesos' and can't afford to eat..u 'herb just adorn the beef'..-

You had an okay verse man....
you gettin better.....your structure was really good in this and i liked your flow it blended really good and wasnt hard to read at all......Your punches was good and they hit hard and stuck.....keep it up man.........


Creams's best lines

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you need to elevate man.......you had no structure what so ever......your flow was horried and i couldnt read your verse at all becuase your lines was short then really long.....you need to work on that alot.....and your punches they didnt even really hit you seriously need to elevate alot man.....pc

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lol Sik...u said I had better structure and punches but gave me lower points than Cream...lol all good playa


vote still counts..

holla

Cream...So I expect that you'll find another crew...

decent battle

holla

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chea mayne.....i did fuck up lol itz all g'hood playa______

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hott battle...cream you had good multies but thats about it...you didnt really have punches or personals except for things u said about his name your structure was gay and so was yout style...and when you type A VeRsE LiKe ThIs It GeTs AnNoYiNg...it wasnt really consistent and you didnt prove yourself here..

n-sight you didnt have too hott of a verse but you still merked this herb...you had some good punches no personals tho...good structure and flow stayed consistent good drop from you...and this part of a,ine you wrote is sick "Ur 'infant style' is 'infantile'"
hott shyt from you fam

vote: n-sight...one sided battle

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