Aight..
16 Line Limit
15 Minute Time limit
Battle Starts with both starting to spit when you check in...

Both start spittin after check in, lets go...

checkin in, 15 minutes n we spit, aight.

lets go..

lemme start off by sayin this, FUCK YOU, eat an ass//
don't eva try 2 battle me again, cause i'll leave u wit deeper holes than ur mom's ass//

it's like ur punches don't even land, nobody feels 'em, quit//
if u stopped typin n spit out ur 2 cheeks u wouldn't still be shit//

i'm the new risin champ, n nobody's heard of me?//
but i'm like McDonald's the way I serve emcees//

i spit tso much the saliva moves in monsoons//
n kids should pop out of u, cause u pussy, like my mom's wound//

i searched through the websites, u have no history//
n u couldn't spit wit flava, if u swallowed listerine//

bitch u can megabyte me, n watch me rip ur screen//
cause i mop the floor wit emcees like they fuckin mr.clean//

all these shaved birds get put in a fuckin cage//
u couldn't fuck wit me if u paper-mated(like paper-mate the pen) this page//

run away forest n get the hell outta here//
u fuckface, ogor-odored black cobra deseased deer//

Its a quick spit Mix, of n Assaultin emcee addin [Flour-to-the Batter]
You about as recognized in this forum, as the world Recognizes "Matter"
You rhymin bout yo chedder, n spittin the same shit over whos better
you beat me yo lips bein redder, n when referin to both lips there also wetter

Im drivin you lyrically insane,The sad part is im usin only 1/2 of my Membrane
If rap had a slayor, than be happy your added to the poll count of bein Slain
you lack any real game, when i came on this forum i was like whats his name?
your more raps Substance of snay,i can sniff you faster than n 8 ball of Cocaine

You keep runnin the same lies, like you this panther wit 9 lives
you better realize, jus like yo mom deals "Blow" i can have her son sniffin Lines
Don you understand about yo rhymes, this spit started half past nine
yo lines faded wit my vibe, about as visible as n asian openin his eyes

You wont ever own a lexus, so im gonna keep you disrespected
im bein resurrected, n enjoyin n yo eyes watchin my image be reflected
Im spittin this shit wreckless, you more of a nightlight pussy sleepin Restless
you keep starin off like a menance, doin a "Head-count" like yo fav word is Census

aight, finished it up holla back

We need some votes for this battle, lets up this n get the votes we need to get a score peace..

uppin 4 votes

onimonapea won this one without a doubt!!!
Lil-trip, like in b2k's movie u got served!!

i say onimonopea cause he made sense the other cat just put a bunch of punches together u cant throw to many or u will tire ya flow so onimonopea

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663
someone hit this up pleez i need votes

onimonopea won this shit. his shit was funny. other guy, well, it was aiight, but ono got it. peace!

this shyt was close but not in a good way it was hard for me to decide who suked more......but my votes gunna go to lil trip cuz his punches hit harder and he flowed more and his rhymes werent as grade school as onimonapea...bottom line is both of u need to elevate alot iight so go to tutorials and get some skills....
vote=lil-trip......

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yo this was close accualy

lil- man your sturcher sux balls man thats it if you work on it your pnuches will hit batter your flow was better but thats it man

ono- man your sturcher sux to man dont put spaceing in bettween each bar i know what a bar is and i think everpne on here does (retack that some cant even rap) but if oyu work on that maybe your played punches will land alil bit better

v/ono

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