ayo check dis...reppin Philly to tha fullest

ayo check ma streets n u see that we sum of tha illest emcees/
to pic up tha mic n spit as much fire as me//
this the home of tha street thug mentality n gangsta lean/
producin AK fatalities n pockits filled wit green//
yall fuckin rydin... i mean yall got dickrydin votes/
yall suckin so much dick that ya mouf stick closed//
u talkin e-z n rappin hard but u neither so slow up/
u battled me? u won? maybe.. but then ya woke up...//
we was tha ones u saw coppin fuckin glocks n shyt/
i say fuck nicks n dimes cuz we dealin in bricks//
u start shyt in our faces n hands quick to tha holsta/
seconds later its ur 'Face-Off' like 'Jon Travolta'//
look at Free, Bleek, n tha Prop, Chris n Neef/
they doin tha shyt big, damn they bleed these streets//
im tha Great 1 but kid u may be comin in second/
so is u jus a trash-talkin pussy or u quick to tha weapons?//
u spit ill? naw not really so git off me/
leave ya grl wit whyte shyt in her mouf like she was datin Mr. Softee//
most peepl talk about holdin weapons but never have... i do/
then try n commit suicide cuz they shoe-size match they IQ//

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that was pretty funny and it was ok but u need to increse ya word play and better ya rhymes cuz i wasnt feelin it to much but it was good.........

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ayo at least this "critique" is kinda positive so thx

holla atcha boi

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no prob im from philly to so i gotta respect ya mean lol.......................................

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