Shit man...my car note due..bills is killin like Tarantino flicks..niggas schemin...bitches

screamin pay up or shit..-
so im sittin back..hungry as fuck..beggin for luck..wonderin, when dis shit gone rasie up..like

my days fucked...aint no sun rays touch..my face stuck in a desperate place..-
Now who da fuck lookin' out..'cept the lord keepin' dibbs on my whereabouts..there, about

less than perfect livin' lies..givin' time to shit I find..killin' my eyes to see my soul die..a souldier

broken on the fields..lowered shields..so broke, i'm prone to steal..-
Swallowin' bitter shit like it's tasty..wishin' dat niggas dick had never made me..but lately,

caught up in trends da buck against the system..blowin watts like Pioneers latest

invention..prevention ain't what I envision..walkin the thin line between bold and simple..I

was told shit to limit my potential..im jus tryna raise above this primitive syndrome..-
And I'm so suspicious of peeps..it's like every actions is supposed to rip pieces of me..gripped

in fear so I'm even timid to speak..drivin' around tryna find somethin' delicious to eat..when

u owe peeps, ur less than nothin..and I'm bordering on being less than mud..be still says the

Lord..but it's hard when my knees shake from stressin' too much..-
And i don't know whats gone happen..Im walking like double vision seein my soul

laggin..draggin' my whole soul like it's been dumped as trash..and, I'm tryna rebuild the legs

of my life so I can stand..over sands like I'm desserted..a nigga flirted with fate and got

humiliated like circus..why'd my motha even birth us..i'm worthless..even my fuckin shirt is

got dirt runs..-







**AIyo...walks in...sees comp..mhuahahahahaaaaa**


First off,


I see they allowed you to do it..but you're still ugly as shit..-

You should NEVER have started to rap..

^^^Who u killin'..ur only win came against a kid who could hardly rap..-

Kid, your dumbfounded as fuck thinkin' you can win against vets..-
I 'dogged' ya ass..unleashed it, but imma keep you as a pet..-
Ur just a faggot who reps..SUNSHINE --ish nigga, ur 'day is ova'..-
Ur verse is 'luggage on this doomed flight'..u ain't 'claimin this moment'..-
I am shamin' this no name..mamin' this hoe named Final Finale..-
I got so many '5-0s' chasin'..i drop u like crack in da back of an alley..-
My flow so phat I should take it to Ballys..sendin' PMs kid u need to grow up..-
Tha fuck happened to ya strucuture?..got caught up in a lawn mower..-
U a soldier?..nah, dats an insult to our troops overseas..-
Damn, u forcast the future!?!..

Fucka, makin' ur text bolder don't mean u trekkin' bodly into the unknown..-
You got images in ur rhymes..but wit all the smileys not ur dumb tone..-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!!!!

tyte vocab and imagery, flow was hot, mad deep peice could feel the emotion u put in to it....that piece was hot would be nice audio verse

Damn kid!! I felt that to the bones!! Vocab was sick, you painted pictures with that one. I loved the structure the chopped up lines. good shit.

P.S. what inspired this shouldn't keep you down. Release it on paper and move on aight. One