10 lines (5bars)
house rules
gavin spit 1st
ill dropp in 30min. after

yo i cut rapperz down with a sythe u bee living the trith lifel ike mobb deep
u proberly fuk sheep/
u try to peep mens bits u lost ure wits u should grow a pair of tits step away before a catch ure nits u signd up for the basketball team but couldnt afford the kits/
ure rymes be shite ure like rap daryl white but thats not a good thing ita a rude thing/
u smell like gasoline look like sum1 has been peeen on ure shirt u might aswell wear a skirt coz u already look like a girl i hat u and send u in a twirl/
u are a joke ure broke u can afford coke and no u cant get ne of my toke/
u will get beat like kebab meat take ure fucking seat and lidten to my beat/
Mutha fucka u aint nothing but a trucka

in the future try to take ya to make sure all ya keys get plugged in
cuz u rap'n all "off lines" like u not logged in
ur rhymes make sick and have me pause'n to applaud at all
them lines just dont fit like santa claus in the holacaust
my lines never fail, watch em ride like nipples to cold winds
ur raps harder to read than braille to a blind man with no hands
potty mouth u spit shit like u eat thru ya ass
prepare to get this loss assigned in ya record like im seat'n ya class
i cant believe u made flow so basic, i should erase u like No. 2's
I hate to come right out and say it but face it ur gonna lose


kinda weak i kno but look whut i wz work'n wit

up'n.............................................. ..................................................

nice battle i felt like the skill level was average

tstorm-i think u had a stronger opener and a good rhyme scheme u jus need work on ways to deliever ur punches

gavin-i think u need work on ur rhyme sceme cause it was too much of the same most of the way through and also work on harder punches cause most of those lines seemed like fillers but it was good u jus need some work

vote-tstorm

my bad i meant to say twonder i didnt write the name right