Rules:
10 lines
no d/r, crew votes, biting, feeding
u spit first
and i have 48 hours to spit back after i check in wen i first read ur verse (just want to make sure its fair because of the time difference)

gud luck

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you claim to be a fresh Emcee but when you see me you gonna be ready to die like B.I.G/
most likely you just a wannabe thats hyped up like whitney houston when she's piped up/
fuck a battle i can beat you by just stompin you with some nice chucks/
and oh yeah ya girl gave me and my niggaz a nice fuck in a back of a nice truck/
i'm gonna be ill even when i'm dead and gone/
you getting ill is like Will Smith making a Explicit Song/
so leave it alone before that 8 BLAW turn ya face into some ReD ChroMe/
and this is off top of the dome/
you couldn't be a fresh emcee even if they handed you the thrown/
and when you see me in the streets you gonna be like ET and Phone Home/

holla BACK

yeah checkin in, i juz read ur verse now. i'll drop within 2 dayz, im fixing up ma soundclick but i'l drop dw.

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im gonna drop this afternoon

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sweet I will be sure to check this battle then when he drops.
so can someone check out my battle?

http://community.rapbattles.com/poll.php

This guy 'Claiming' he got 'Skillz' but its like they are 'Nonentity' 1
But they are of 'No Use', so ima 'Surgically Remove' it like a 'Vasectomy' 2
Skillz's 'Rhymes' be like his 'Home' so im a 'Murda His Land' 3
He 'Underestimated' ma 'Skillz', so he gonna end up like 'Custer's Last Stand' 4
In 'Hip Hop' u dont belong, u like 'Justin Timberlake' trying to be 'Black' 5
You 'Worked So Hard' on a wack verse like wen a 'Slave' 'Breaks One's Back' 6
And im like tha 'Slave Master' to 'Whoop Your Ass' for simple 'Leasure' 7
Like your mama tha 'Dominatrix', but I inflict 'Severe Pain' not 'Pleasure' 8
To me ur verse be like a 'Free Post' like KKKHater's, its that 'Irrelivent To Me' 9
But i'll 'Bomb' ya n e way, leave ya like tha 'Japanese' at the 'Battle Of Bismarck Sea' 10

LiL Explanation: Custer's Last Stand and Battle Of Bismarck Sea are just battles and stuff in history, so yeah if u unsure look em up...i aint explaining it

Holla now wid votes....

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um this was close both had wack verses the only thing that pulled this out of the water was freshs one extra punch he had period and kkkhater stop freeposting man dam ok

v/fresh

return the favor links are in the sig

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lol aiight thanks i think :| lol uppin fo more votes [3]

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come on ya'll uppin fo votes [4]

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This battle was aight...alot of punches in there...good battle to both Emcee's..my vote goes to FreSh he killed it in there...

Vote = FreSh_EmCee

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

killed him you deleted that man off tha site
with yo good flows and structures
u need to work on yo rhymes alittle bit more
but they were good practice make perfect
they say good battle keep it up

yo uppin fo more votes [5]

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wow fresh man u did nto need to kick him off the site lol....simple fresh one this 1 he just beat him in all cat's and next time......ya need to make ti so ya can make more people actualy want to read both of ay verse i was so tired after read ya verse it was so....boring lol it was a weak battle but fresh did 52% and skillz did 30%

Vote-fresh

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Aiight Skillz ya had ok structure but ya flow was fucked. You had 4 word lines then like 15 word lines it was complicated like reading a kidnergardeners writing. Ya punches were ok i.e. the Et one caught my attention

Fresh ya had good structure and ya flow was very good. I liked how you werked in the history lesson. Ya punches just connected better. I wa feelin ya verse much better.

Vote-Fresh

Return da favor-In ma sig

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