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Some War shit: I need some feedback Pls!!!
IP: 9908 6309
Yo I wrote this while I was In Fallujeh Iraq (Im in the Army 82nd Airborne!
![]() It's Crazy, fuckin Iraqi's tryin to kill a kid So i gotta keep a "peace" in my hand like the hippies did These cats tryin to send a hot one to my dome they probably mad cuz we blew up their home We here tryin to give a little help But on the real we tryin to take they wealth I get so sick, my blood starts to boil to think that this war is all over oil While i stay tryin & my boys stay dyin politicians back at home they stay lyin But I guess I can say its all good Better to die here than dyin in the hood At least here my fam gets a piece of change a little bit of dough to help them maintain But still the same, I think they'd rather have me here cuz if i can't raise my daughter it wouldn't be fair And I still drop a tear when I think of when I left but I aint scared cuz I know God knows best UNLESS.... All this is done in vain Nobody would ever trade the sun for the rain |
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IP: B3C5 6F0D
yo that was deep now i got some insight on whats really going on over there but i was feelin sat piece stay up n alive much love
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest ![]() ![]() |
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Suspended: Cheating
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IP: 981C FD80
For sure some deep shit, and if your still out ther, watch your back, u one motherfucker that doesnt deserve to die. Godbless man, hopefully your destiny unfolds...
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
it was some deep shyt i mean it could use a lil improvement but overall good spit yo can u hit dis up wit a fair vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125521
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