16 lines
You have half an hour
House rules

Good luck.

Aight, lets go...

Its ok if my earlier post bout Iraq, got yo whole mentallity pissed
the way im Spittin Now, i deserve to be "Grindin" wit Clipse
don be mad cus youll never win, im jus a kid wit a gift
this aint a battle its n assault, your tomb gonna read too Dissed to be missed

Lets step up the skill, show me some shit of yours above 3 syllables
yo lines are like you in this rap game, so fucking invisible
shit that was 4 i went ahead, your barley visible
well my lines are gettin maxed, theres a reason i think yo spits are minimal

Shadow this is me spittin, n wit the way im spittin n talkin
im doin circles on you, this forum must think im Cwalkin
im hatin to have you pissed, n continue with my mockin
but this aint a Military camp Shadow, wit every "Head" needin "Cocking"

Sorry to interrupt your winning streak, but do you mind if i Continue?
i got this whole forum ridin wit me now, they keep yellin for me to rip you
im droppin you faster than 24's on a denalhi, you want me to spin you?
the way im hurtin yo head lyrically, they'll need to wrap yo head like a hindu

Holla back, peace..

Yo sorry, my computer went apeshit and I had to restart. I had some shit in my head, give me a minute or two to type this shit out.

Be better if we went two rounds, so we can do a lil mix verse multis n get it goin..its a lot harder to bring it to the table unless you feed off each other a bit, i got 15 mins before i gotta leave work so do yo best to get it in there, otherwise ill reply tommorow, good luck n holla back..

Fuck it, I'm doing this on a new computer, it won't let me submit the verse.

Don' worry about it....I gotta bounce here, so if you can post that verse in the next 10 mins thatd be good..otherwise ill check tommorow, keep it real peace..

Fuck it I don’t need 16:

Man it’s sad, a whole verse with no personal in it
And you trying to pass it off like a work of 5 minutes
Clear to the rest of us though, shit’s pre-written
Drop my name once or twice… just so we don’t think them lines bitten
Life ain’t fair, this kid such a nothing, his profile is completely bare
I leave him so broke, even homeless people giving him quarters spare
Won’t drop a verse like that for three months if I continue this way
Because I hit so hard your ghost writers are demanding disability pay
Hoping for a happy ending, but I got your life’s script flipped
This kid trying the road to success, but only manage a lil-trip
We could rematch forever, I know it’s an idea you dread
Cuz like an uneven coin I always come up ahead
I mean shit, it’s clear I’m battling a square this time…
Because this kid got matched by a shadow with just 4 lines….


(sorry dude, my other comp wouldn't let me do any enter lines and kept restarting and shit... )

Oh, and sure going two rounds would be cool. I think we should just do a new battle anyway, but you get to feed off this battle... how's that sound? Kinda too late to change the rules on this one.

yo ima give this to shadows edge. he took this one. his verse woz more elevated and like he sed lil trip ddnt hav one personal in his whole verse. good punches thought from lil trip, verse woz aiight. liked tha flow, tha verse all round woz aiight for me. shadow'z verse had a stronger flow to it though. he came up wid his experience, u cud tell.

vote = shadows edge

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oh shit forgot to say hit up ma battle too:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125237

i cudnt edit ma post, so i had to post again..sorry for freeposting
lol
hit up ma battle though

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^ aight good looks, upping for votes. drop a link and i will hit it up with an honest vote.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

The two would be better, cus it comes from a different standpoint to cus yours finished n usually thats where a reader likes most, if you do another one feedin off mine n i feed off either your first or second one it works that way, post it when your online im at work now, peace..

^ nah... not today.... maybe later though. Got a busy rest of week...

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Yeah bro, i jus switched over off some other battle sites so tryin to establish off some real spitters as opposed to buildin off New spitters n you could probalyl see that from the spit, you can even tell jus how we where beefin before n after the spit talkin changed quite a bit, but yeah will deffinatly finish this time, peace..