.Read Between The Lines.

F eel the goodness in all forms of life
L ove all things; let go of strife
O pen your petals; let love flow in
W iden the gap; let love grow within
E rase the scars of the past
R est in the assurance that only love lasts

O wn your self-worth in spite of what others may say
F ind again the peace in your day

L ive your potential; let the world know
I nto yourself let a new energy flow
F ind out you have so much to give
E mbrace love; laugh and life

The end. Feedback please.

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yo this was a good piece....not bat imager and it had good emotion keep it up man.....we should do a collabo sometime

Agree.........^^my 1st ever poetry drop.

Uppun

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This was ridciously wack . . .
Enuff said . . Bye.

























LMAO - joking dawg i like you`re rhyme scheme is good i aint much of a poetic person but i think Seperating the letter to the verse made it hard to flow still good shit though peace.

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Hahahaha^^^^every hard soul has sensative insides....

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yo it was cool had a lil bit of imagery 2 it though

Thnx apreciate it...........UppUN

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iono... it was alright, a little too cliche(sp?) for my taste... had a good message, just try to be more creative next time

just bein real

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Aight, U yo realness thanks

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It was a niSe piece, I liked it...

Just dont try to battle no one with it

It was definitely some deep shit, keep it comin though...tight poem dawg

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