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no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
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16 line max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Yep.

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Kids premanitions of winnin` are cut short an laughed at
Fuck punchin` this pussy.. i jus` give him a bitch slap
Have ya ruein` the day.. while i`m ruinin` yours
I mean really.. what idiot goes into battle down on all four`s?
Fool`s droppin` PM`s: "Yo shall we post early to get votes?"
Nope. Cos the only time ya servin` is askin` to take my coat
The pretence is wearin` thin.. this visionary`s wack
He can`t face losin`.. so the idiot jus` turns his back
So i rip that up too.. it`s like i`v got a Mac 11 in each hand
Have Prem Catch .22.. an you know we aint talkin` `bout my band
I`m swattin` the fly.. wait.. my words hit ya brain an dissolve in ya chest
Test me.. have ya fucked by my verse.. so you literally get laid to rest

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125902 - 1
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk_politics/3728617.stm - 2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122097 - 3


Even if you ‘catch twenty two’…I’ll reload three times n break you…
Make you exasperate…shoot at ya heart but ya lungs participate to…
Crew up for 4 days….humiliation as you enter administration…
No-one there for ‘conversation’ n ‘check in’ still awaitin confirmation…(link 1)
Wen the board figure the ‘dick-ridin’…re-launched will sack ya….
You Like ‘tony blair’…the way ‘condoms’ bein launched at~ya…(d/r, link 2)
You assemble a verse but people just skip to my drop first…
I’ll overload ya torsoe wiv air…to assist you wiv an ‘outburst’…
You compliment me dawg…you make my ass~kissed…
Cos u immediently changed ur name after my ‘very first’ diss….(link 3)

Uppin!!!!!!

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Smh.

Wtf has Tony blair got to do with me?

An why put the link to a battle i beat you in?

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^^^it ain't a personal bitch....stop swayin....oh n i posted that link cos after my first bar you changed ur name.....????


uppin some votes ere!

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Wow......no votes.

Casual had a pretty solid verse. His punches were hitting and he had some good personals. I like how he changed his structure back.....it flows well now.

Premanition had an OK verse. A few punches hit but not that many. Flow was OK and a few personals were thrown......Casuals verse was better

Vote - Casual

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breakdowns...

weak battle compared to what i thought it would be

casual

Kids premanitions of winnin` are cut short an laughed at
Fuck punchin` this pussy.. i jus` give him a bitch slap
6
Have ya ruein` the day.. while i`m ruinin` yours
I mean really.. what idiot goes into battle down on all four`s?
6
Fool`s droppin` PM`s: "Yo shall we post early to get votes?"
Nope. Cos the only time ya servin` is askin` to take my coat
7
The pretence is wearin` thin.. this visionary`s wack
He can`t face losin`.. so the idiot jus` turns his back
5
So i rip that up too.. it`s like i`v got a Mac 11 in each hand
Have Prem Catch .22.. an you know we aint talkin` `bout my band
6
I`m swattin` the fly.. wait.. my words hit ya brain an dissolve in ya chest
Test me.. have ya fucked by my verse.. so you literally get laid to rest
6
seriously played shit man...wow nothing amusing or original...that's not a vets verse...you must of keyed that in like a second...cause i've read some hot shit from you before...


premanition

Even if you ‘catch twenty two’…I’ll reload three times n break you…
Make you exasperate…shoot at ya heart but ya lungs participate to…
6
Crew up for 4 days….humiliation as you enter administration…
No-one there for ‘conversation’ n ‘check in’ still awaitin confirmation…(link 1)
7.5 thank god a personal that's funny
Wen the board figure the ‘dick-ridin’…re-launched will sack ya….
You Like ‘tony blair’…the way ‘condoms’ bein launched at~ya…(d/r, link 2)
6.5
You assemble a verse but people just skip to my drop first…
I’ll overload ya torsoe wiv air…to assist you wiv an ‘outburst’…
7
You compliment me dawg…you make my ass~kissed…
Cos u immediently changed ur name after my ‘very first’ diss….(link 3)
7.5

v- premanition

yes i'm as surprised as you...wack battle

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breakdown for illtalic:

flow:nice job some multis thrown in too workin well 7/10

volcab:good job here too i liked the use 7/10

punches:this is where i thought you weren't workin too well nothing too great you threw punches though so 6/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for premination:

flow:basic not quite as good as illtalic 6/10

volcab:workin well no problems 7/10

punches:you had a couple of alright lines my fav,"You Like ‘tony blair’…the way ‘condoms’ bein launched at~ya…" good job at keepin the lines personal 8/10

overall:21/30

vote--premination it really came down to the punches here good job

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Every single week DirtBoy votes against me.

Get a fuckin` life.

Don`t vote on my battles again.

Moron.

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ok this is my opinion of this battle..........
the structers were about the same....the flows were about the same.......
on the multies premation was better....but his punches were just OK........
on the punches casual defently took it...he didnt really have personals tho....
premation did have personals but they were week....so I have to say.......






















vote...........casual..........

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