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Old 05-24-04, 07:53 AM   #1
Darkman
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Hoztile Flows

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My flow's so hot, i make da mike combust,
trust...the darkman's flows are robust,
Sittin back n listenin to my flows is a must,
out of my click i'm da deepest outta all of us,
More than bus, when i drop rhymes they collide with yo
way of thinkin turn you to tha darkside, my
Dark flows burn em out from da inside,
leave my foes shook make em sleep wid their eyes wide,
open, leavin niggas prayin n hopin
Dat dis ain't for real, just tha dope they be smokin, my
Flow reflects reality, man i never lie, they
Know i'll never stop so they just don't try,
Cos when i lyrically flip i'm raw widda
kinda mentality to cut you widda chainsaw,
Leavin motherfuckers on da floor...yo
Come den test me if you think you're sure,
heh heh heh! Things are about to get gory,
see me flip n dash you from da 28th storey,
like dis was bungee widdout da rope, dat'll
Teach a boy to try n boy it like i ain't dope
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Old 05-24-04, 08:03 AM   #2
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Yo people i need some feedback
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Old 05-24-04, 12:48 PM   #3
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pretty good shyt but i have an idea

My flow's so hot, i make da mike com~bust,
trust...the darkman's flows are ro~bust,
Sittin back n listenin to my flows is a~must,

try breaking up some of ur lines that have good rhymes and flow and turn them into multis iight good shyt keep elevatin......................
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