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no hate crew or d/r votea


u spit first 5 votes to win

aight

girl there's no way u kan be sick
this whole fukin thing hasta be a trick
u think u kan fuk wit TheOne
i gotsa gun. turn now an run
move ur lil ass up outta here
go home an look at ur own fear in the mirror
u should be ashamed losin to a first timer
not really, kuz i'ma fukin awsome rhymer
i may not be the best, but betta then u
thiz iz like a pro vs. a jew
i'll shoot u in the head, right now
u fukin dead, how? kuza the big blow!

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

yo where ya go?
r u spittin or u bakin?

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

aight check it

Im sprayin shit all day at dis newcomer, like a fuckin can of Mace/
Got ya runnin to the nearest church, like u da new rappin Ma$e/
Callin yoself ONE cuz you rap soft shit like Nelly/
Only thing you've ever seen hard is yo moms pregnant Belly/
How you expect to win dis shit when u cant even rhyme yo fuckin Closer/
Spittin shit so weak Im embarrased to call u a Poser/burnin ya lyrics like a Toaster/
NIgga, only thing I've ever lost in my life is my Virginity/
Maybe after dis ass whoopin I'll still leave you ur fuckin Dignity/
Fuckin Pussy, used to live where da big boys are but Croz put you Out of Order/
Saw me on da Streets packin nuthin but Heat, Got ya runnin back to da Fuckin Border/(hes from canada)

IIIGHT plane and simple the one lost
Streucture: Croz
Punches: Croz
Enjoyed: croz
And vote: Croz
ooo yea in our battle the one vs me 5-0 is a tko and 5 to w/e is a win so da polls can close iight the one, and croz vote on the battle Street warrior vs the one

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

yo ppl, itz ur choice, explian ur vote then vote on da poll

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

aight ppl, itz ur kall, explain ur vote and then show it on the poll

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

wow........this wasnt even close, theone reeeaally needs to work on just about everthing. seriously. but it was ur first time and thats alright juss keep practicin. croz had nice punches but needs help on the flow. ight.

uppin dis battle

i agree wit Luvdem, croz, u ave amazin punches, but ur flow needs work, i just need..... everythin

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

I think this was a basic win for dacroz...he did some good rhymes.....for theone...wow u need to stop rhyming for a while....go to a dictionary or somethign and get new words ask ur mom or dad for words because u used abc rhymes not trying top play you or nothign but ur rhymes are sorry

Vote-dacroz

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DaCROZofHB
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 6/10

TheOne
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

v/ DaCROZofHB

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uppin dis battle will return da fav

uppin dis battle and please explain, and leave a link ill hit it up