you know the rules
just check in and spit
aight koo

chek one...chek two..........................i'll spit in a few.

im a addict to spittin, fur dis i cant stop
who this FELLA in my grill, who think he can ROC?
listen, im way to hot, n you couldn't rhyme if i provided the syllables
im the doc and your lyric-prescription iz xpired n unfillable

I got mad PUNCHes, you might think I was Hawaiian,
im lyin', i couldn't resist sayin some wack shit, im tired of tryin'
And you can chill, your secrets safe with me,
Clintons intern isn't the only femcee who sucks on trees

yuse a mental emcee, who buy rimes from Lyrics-R-Us
i guess that's why yur bars are crippled, n u ride the short yellow bus
yung tigger, step to me lame, n the Wiz of Oz won't b able to explain
why this heartless nicca singin' "If I only had brain"--- ha ha ha

DaLyRicalVillian is the lyric clepto puerto-rican
my lyrics are heat seekin,' from the fire of my vocab peppers you eatin'
I'm silly, but really, did the villian think he could win this battle
you'd have a better chance getting a prize from a box of fiddle-faddle.

peeps...don't sleep on this battle...It gonna be hot. chek back and VOTE!!!

Aight.. I like it.. But feel this...

Niggas jaws is dropped waitin for my spit homies droolin//
If thats the sickest shit you got than you should go back to schoolin//
And "Jsmoove" That sounds like a lead singer in a band//
Only thing slick is yo dick and the oil in yo hand//
And you's a pro koo.. Yo daddy used to beat his meat too//
In fact he jacked off in a donkey and the product was you//
Your rhymes are whiney like bitches when they get on the rag//
After this battle have a crazy mans head in a bag//
And then ill give the bag to yo momma//
Stutter in real life, stutter in yo rhymes writin wit hella commas//
I gettin props like this was a rhyme write-off//
Next time you go to write a verse go and find a better rapper to bite off//

Uppin............................................. ............................

Ok

Dalyrcial...
your really basic ... go back to schoolin.... you gotta come with a better opener than that if you wanna win a battle you got good flow with some filler and you got good structure but you lack punches i thihk i see one persoanla and it isnt even good

Jsmoove...
ok you came a little more complex but i looked at your whole verse and all your lines could be worded better to hit him harder...and flow better... besides the fact you still worked him over with better punches... and the fella roc rhyme was pretty hot but sitll could have beeen worded better...

Vote -Jsmoove

Hit up one of My battles links in da SIGGY

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im a addict to spittin, fur dis i cant stop
who this FELLA in my grill, who think he can ROC?
This is a pretty tight opener
listen, im way to hot, n you couldn't rhyme if i provided the syllables
im the doc and your lyric-prescription iz xpired n unfillable
This is a weak one
I got mad PUNCHes, you might think I was Hawaiian,
im lyin', i couldn't resist sayin some wack shit, im tired of tryin'
FILLer
And you can chill, your secrets safe with me,
Clintons intern isn't the only femcee who sucks on trees
Clinton is played, dawg
yuse a mental emcee, who buy rimes from Lyrics-R-Us
i guess that's why yur bars are crippled, n u ride the short yellow bus
THis was aiight
yung tigger, step to me lame, n the Wiz of Oz won't b able to explain
why this heartless nicca singin' "If I only had brain"--- ha ha ha
THis is a good one
DaLyRicalVillian is the lyric clepto puerto-rican
my lyrics are heat seekin,' from the fire of my vocab peppers you eatin'
This line was weak
I'm silly, but really, did the villian think he could win this battle
you'd have a better chance getting a prize from a box of fiddle-faddle.
Good closing


Niggas jaws is dropped waitin for my spit homies droolin//
If thats the sickest shit you got than you should go back to schoolin//
weak opener
And "Jsmoove" That sounds like a lead singer in a band//
Only thing slick is yo dick and the oil in yo hand//
eh, mediocre
And you's a pro koo.. Yo daddy used to beat his meat too//
In fact he jacked off in a donkey and the product was you//
THis was a sucka punch
Your rhymes are whiney like bitches when they get on the rag//
After this battle have a crazy mans head in a bag//
NOT A PUNCH
And then ill give the bag to yo momma//
Stutter in real life, stutter in yo rhymes writin wit hella commas//
FILLLLER
I gettin props like this was a rhyme write-off//
Next time you go to write a verse go and find a better rapper to bite off//
Ok closing

aiight this is how it goes-
JSMoove-6.5/10
DaLyrical Assasin-4/10

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

To Break It Down

Jsmoove Started Much Better Than DaLyRicaLViLLain And He Kept Itt Up

He Had Better Flow And Punches...Jsmoove Just Try And Keep It Up Try And a Few Better Pucnhes

DaLyRicaLViLLain...You'll Need To Come Up Wit better Punches And Maybe Try Some Multis

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UPPIN' this one to close it out....prove the media wrong folks...minorities do vote!!!

JSMovve

let's close this one out............................