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06-02-04, 11:00 AM | #1 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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Revised GHOST story..noise in the basement
IP: 1EE0 12EB
This is a true story..
I was about 10 when.. My peeps decided to move into house..close to the woods.. It had white posts secluded..we were folks from the hood.. The excitement of a back yard was quite large..garage spaces.. I was quite riveted..because I was livin' in the basement.. The first night was all fright..noticed all night a light in the hall.. Right thru my door to the adjacent room..it was light on the wall.. All the lamps were out so it didn't make sense..then it shifted.. Moved a few inches..my body froze like cryo-suspension.. Chills quick-silvered down my spine..still, I was in a panic.. Managed to get up to shut my door..but the light already vanished.. I ran and jumped under the sheets..my mattress soaked in sweat.. My breath a quick cadence..prayin', but it wasn't over yet.. A moment crept when I heard the implausible..it was audible.. "Get out..get out of this house now"..shit seemed impossible.. My frail legs gathered strength somehow..I made a dash upstairs.. Bust into my peeps room like.."We gotta get out now, I'm scared".. But, they didn't believe me..thought I was just having a nightmare.. Moved upstairs from the basement..didn't spend another night there.. But, it doesn't end here. After I moved upstairs, my mom turned the basement into a den.. We were watching T.V. one night..then heard what sounded like wind.. It was coming from the boiler..we got up to investigate the sound.. But when we checked out the room..the was nothing to be found.. Just silence and puzzled looks..so we sat back on the couch.. Then heard a little girl laugh.."I'm gettin' the fuck out this house".. My mom slapped me in the mouth..but it was clear she was shaken.. The next day pops discovered what caused the manifestations.. **In 1971, the first house on that land burned to the ground. They build our house on top of it. Two people died in that fire, Mrs. Caldwell and her 7 year old daughter.** |
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06-02-04, 11:40 AM | #2 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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thats some crazzy stuff right there i dunno whether its true or not but wutever but the piece itself needed a little work but not to bad overall........
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06-02-04, 12:49 PM | #3 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 1EE0 12EB
what kind of work does this piece need son...holla back wit critique
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