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05-31-04, 12:15 PM
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***Man Down***
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LyricalMethod vs. $ik
IP: B6DF 2706
10-20 lines(i don't care, in between is fine)
no hater,crew, or dickrhydin votes 100+ posters only
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."
  THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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05-31-04, 12:47 PM
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***Man Down***
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IP: B6DF 2706
do you want me to drop first or what cuz you takin all day
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."
THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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05-31-04, 01:01 PM
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***Man Down***
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here it is
IP: B6DF 2706
what the deal dawg, im tired of your flows\ 1
rappin against niggas who ain't worthy foes/2 you spit shit go enlist to fags heaven a.k.a camouflage flows\3 my punches land so hard, the indentation will camouflage you nose/4 nigga im ashamed, you life is a cover-up like comb over bangs\5 you a girl go tag team with lyrical flames(no hate lyrical_flames)/6 you must be insane, like a farmer lyrically im just combing the grain\7i spit hail showers, even with a verbal umbrella, you can't stop the rain/8i bring the pain,$ik's your name, even if g-unit wrote your shit you still couldn't spit game!!\9  rb’s the stock market, so you bound to crash man/10 im sort of gay bashin like Re$TricTedits just a splash man/11the only way you run away with fame is if you daman dash'n\12 im sorry bout this im gay bashin, im pointing out fags like faux pas fashion/13 yo must be a chameleon cuz your punches are invisible/14 After you loose nobody's fuckin missin you/15 u don't get ass, the only time you get hard is when M.J. stiffin you/16 u might need  after i murder you cuz even with flame retardent flows my verbs still burnin through/17
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."
THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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05-31-04, 01:11 PM
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IP: 2F05 D129
[i]Collap~sin 'n' blas~tin dis wack~bitch, ya shudn't~spit
I'll rip~him~quick cuz Like A Bodyguard Lyrical gonna Take~A~Bullet Slap~ta~crack, puttin a Mic In Ya Spine ta Disintegrate~Ya~Back 'n' I'm Puttin Coke On His Rearend" cuz I'm makin Dis Weak Ass Crack Releasing~freeze cuz I'm breathing~wit~ease 'n' killin~Lyrical, it's simple Poppin dis pussy ass Pimple cuz Unlike Lyrical's Slugs my Darts Leave More Than A Dimple Shellz In Ya Skull 'n' like I'm Undressin Ya Wit My Eyes I'm Fuckin Wit Ya Men~ta~lly Drainin His Life 'n' Tradin It Ta Dracula so I'm Spendin Big Money cuz I've Spent~Dis~G Puttin Telephones In Ya Dome so ya Mind Will Constantly Ring, nigga I'm like Eyptians tha way I'm tha King Plus I'm Puttin Bullets In Ya Mouth 'n' got em Posin As Ya Tongue Ring Immensly~Complex my mic been known ta Bend~Necks 'n' I'm Killin Him Quick just so I can get ta Tha Victim Dat Next Ya weak dude I wreak pain ta fools 'n' Murda Everyone Around cuz I'm Sloppy Wit Ma Tecs Im Out.. |
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05-31-04, 01:11 PM
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IP: 2F05 D129
Uppin.............................................
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05-31-04, 01:43 PM
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IP: 2F05 D129
...................Uppin For Votes Peeps...................
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05-31-04, 01:51 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 6467 9244
LyricalMethod
u had sum gud flow, ure structure was questionable but u managed to pull it off. ure punches were there some hittin hard some hittin weak. u had personals in there which was gud and u even dropped in a link showin some creativity. ure wordplay was basic mainly but complex in some slight places. overall u came consistently average with sum hard punches. OVERALL - 7/10 $ik ure flow was totally fucked cuz ure structure was wack, u had far too many stretched lines playa. and wat's with all the ~ cuz they aint helpin ure verse at all. ure punches were weak with probably one or two decent ones and u lacked really in every other aspect. personals...well i cudn't find any really and ure wordplay was really choppy all throughout ure spit. u need to work on ure structure and try usin some personals in ure spit playa! OVERALL 5.5/10 V/ - LyricalMethod
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05-31-04, 04:15 PM
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
lyrical takes this
lyrical.......your punches was better then $siks and your structure was better all i gotta say is reword your shit so it hits harder and you could use some work on your structure man.....pc
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06-01-04, 12:40 PM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Yo $ik yo structure was messed up man. That screwed up your flow badly, your punches were also screwed up on that account.
Lyrical, you had good punches, but on some parts your flow was removed for that sake. Vote- LyricalMethod
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06-02-04, 10:25 AM
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IP: 63F3 DE49
Lyrical you got this one... ya structure was a lil' shakey but $ik was way off and irritating with all those damn ~s... that made it harder to understand and follow up
with... Lyrical hit harder overall... Good Battle you got my camouflage... i noticed from my other battle but you used it well. Keep it Up... vote: Lyrical Method
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06-02-04, 01:32 PM
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Just Another DipSet
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IP: C1DA C961
tha break down
punches:lm flow:lm structure:lm personals:both overall:lm can ya guys return tha fava the links are on my sig
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