8-16 lines
3-0 KO
5 VOTE TO WIN


Check in due 10 mins

Verse due 20 mins

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you like a bitch with aids KillaCamFlow\\
nothing to the game but killin rap slow\\
im spitting these words of sharpage\\
u feedin me like nicateen for a smoker\\
u handle me like the stench of a bums oader\\
taste and smell each word,\\
couldnt take a shower still feel failure every hour\\
can admit you got served cause your shit just sour,\\
a rapper that belongs in the garbage\\
so shread ya weak ass book of lyrics\\
truth be said "no one wansta hear it"\\

Yo kid after this battle you gonna be this mc' s rhyme is MarvouLous//
My rhymes are gonna leave ya hurting while ya lines leaving me ScareLess//
Fam how u gonna try battling me when u could not even beat PoliFick //
He left you with a HORRIFIC ending to ur life and explain it very SPECIFIC//
My Heroic VERSE spins and turns fake mc like ya self into a unexplained CURSE//
Kill's gonna IMMERSE a traverse with you confusion and say my shit in REVERSE//
IM not here to sit around and Explain hwo to rap or sell you $40.00 of curls or
CoCaine//
My rhymes is gonna leave you PoPPING VEIN's and stay behind i stay ahead andMainTain//
Your gonna have to proceed with you punches so they can come at me in Full Speed//
Ya rhymes are not gonna make me BLEED so u gonna have to stop..think...and ReLead..//
You couldn't WAIT to come to ur FATE of this Memorial Date so u better put on ur armour PLATE//
My rhymes is putting up number like big pun WEIGHT,so u better get ready for my FlOW RATE//

Im out!!!!!!

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I gotta re do this my comp messed up sry lol brb 3 mins

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Yo kid after this battle you gonna be this mc' s rhyme is MarvouLous//
My rhymes are gonna leave ya hurting while ya lines leaving me ScareLess//
Fam how u gonna try battling me when u could not even beat PoliFick //
He left you with a HORRIFIC ending to ur life and explain it very SPECIFIC//
My Heroic VERSE spins and turns fake mc and start getting UNexplain Curse//
IM gonna have to IMMERSE a burst of confusion make u say shit in RevERSE//
Im gonna have ot explain my barz and rhymes are overtaking like CoCaine//
My rhymes is gonna leave you PoPPING VEIN's whileim ahead and MainTain//

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The last word is MainTains stupid comp is so retared lol

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its a good battle
killa he's verse wasbulit better and some nice word play
ravage was good to i like the line in the begining,bout the ''aids'' and shit
vote/ravage

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

killa kam came out with this. becuase his strucutre was better, his lyrics rhymed more, and his ending was the best so on top of that killakam got this vote.

Killa had this one...better punches, wordplay, and the structure was ok..his verses...they all rhymed...my vote goes to killa...'

v/ KillaCamFlow

okay killacam took this

structure-Killa
flow-Killa
punches-Kila
creativity-Killa
enjoyment-Killa

no offence ravage but you need to elevate and work on your pucnhes so tht you can reword them and also they hit harder.......you could also work on your strucutre so your flow blends more.......pc

v/killa

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yo man i dont belive this do i need to explian myself killa wont his just a better style stuircher

v/killa

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