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05-30-04, 09:46 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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triple_n vs. shadow
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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05-30-04, 10:05 PM | #2 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
aight checkin in this shyt good luck triple
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05-31-04, 02:38 AM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
checkin' this mothafucka an good luck back to ya
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06-02-04, 09:09 PM | #4 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
a'ight....aight can you beleive this kid,
ok here it goes this kid triple N says he's good, and highly respected...... im not a polygraph,but his lies are very easily detected... you cant beat a good rapper,so put it on ya "wishlist"..... ur not sick, so change urcrew name to royal dickless...... "royal Sickness" signafies "the wackest mc'ees only"....... c'mon homie,"r.s." is done,so once again ur left lonely... you battled 38 times and your skill is that of a rookie...... keep fantasizing@ disastor,cuz ull never get any pussy.. ur a newbbatteler ,thats how you got the countless win.. i own you,thats y my dick in ya mouf and balls on ya chin... if weak rappin was a sin,your ass would go to "hell-son".... rhymin's ya life?,quit..and start singing with willy nelson.... your my lyrical slave... i got you scratchin my ball sack.... ill rip out ur spinal cord and lyrically lash u in the back..... i realize that u dont have a chance and prolly wont spit....... u in da lyrical sewer cuz ur verse will put u in 3 feet of shit....
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06-03-04, 04:30 PM | #5 | |||||||
Above All Else
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hahahaha..dis shyt waz funny as fuck...
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06-03-04, 11:45 PM | #6 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 4289 77F4
They say you learn from your failures, well here's your first lesson
I'm amazed that he actually believes he gon win wit those played rhymes He's called "shadow" cuz his rhymes are a "step behind" the times He's got a vets rec, but he's nothing more than a novice Thats why he's "shadow" cuz he's never gon get noticed Were you potty trained, or are u jus somewhat mentally unfit Post ya rhymes in the bathroom please, cuz thats where u "drop shit!" This guy throws more shit than monkeys when they get frantic An full of enuff hot air to fly 4 people in a basket across the atlantic He dreams of being black, smokin' trees an speakin' some ebonics But reality is this bitch went to rehab when he got "Hooked on Phonics" Thats enough to rip that shit he dropped!!!
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06-04-04, 06:57 AM | #7 | |||||
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Post ya rhymes in the bathroom please, cuz thats where u "drop shit!"
I've used a line like that before....it was somethin like "cause your afraid to drop shit like bathrooms with no walls"
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06-04-04, 12:30 PM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 1ECF 8460
V/ shadow
this was a nice battle, but what surprised me is that shadow came quite hard and triple n came surprisingly weak which is a bit of a turn around. both of y'all had sum gud flow but i was feeling shadows more cuz he had better structure. triple n u had a couple of stretched lines. both had punches some hittin hard and some hittin weak, but shadow came a little harder and he had better personals even tho neither one of them showed any relative power in their personals. both lacked in originality and creativity, although shadow did use some links which i like and his verse was more humurous. also triple n used a few played out lines, like that bathroom line i have seen before and that ebonics, and hooked on phonics lines...they have been used before by a few ppl......shadows edge for one used it b4 u!! |
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06-05-04, 02:17 AM | #9 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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this kid triple N says he's good, and highly respected......
im not a polygraph,but his lies are very easily detected... you cant beat a good rapper,so put it on ya "wishlist"..... ur not sick, so change urcrew name to royal dickless...... ^^^^ decent 1st 2 lines...last line there was corny keep fantasizing@ disastor,cuz ull never get any pussy.. ur a newbbatteler ,thats how you got the countless win.. ^^ CORNY and PLAYED...and I know SHADOW ain't talkin bout battlin noobs i own you,thats y my dick in ya mouf and balls on ya chin... if weak rappin was a sin,your ass would go to "hell-son".... rhymin's ya life?,quit..and start singing with willy nelson.... ^^ gay reference sound more like a fantasy...Willy nelson line was coo i realize that u dont have a chance and prolly wont spit....... u in da lyrical sewer cuz ur verse will put u in 3 feet of shit.... ^^ decent closer 22/30 I'm amazed that he actually believes he gon win wit those played rhymes He's called "shadow" cuz his rhymes are a "step behind" the times ^^ decent opener and kinda true...i felt his shit was played out even before I read ur opener...so...it hits kinda hard He's got a vets rec, but he's nothing more than a novice Thats why he's "shadow" cuz he's never gon get noticed ^^ best line in whole battle...made me chuckle An full of enuff hot air to fly 4 people in a basket across the atlantic He dreams of being black, smokin' trees an speakin' some ebonics But reality is this bitch went to rehab when he got "Hooked on Phonics" ^^^...decent closer Rhyming Tie Flow Tie Punches Triple Vote: Triple...harder hitting, less-played verse |
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06-05-04, 09:08 AM | #10 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
nevr mind dirtyboy sorry
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06-05-04, 09:23 AM | #11 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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my bad...nvm
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06-05-04, 09:44 AM | #12 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: AAA4 CB0B
ok the break down
opener:triple n had a nice opener but i didn't like how it was also a personnal. Shadow went str8 in for the kill which is ok.triple n:7/10 Shadow:5/10 closer:triple n that last line i thought was the worst, imean you don't beleive in saving the best for last.Shadow you eased your way out which went well with the flow. Triple n:5/10 shadow:7/10 punches: both were good but shadow's hit harder. Triple n:7/10 shadow:8/10 personals: same thing as the punches.Triple n 6/!0 shadow 7/10 winner shadow 27/40 loser triple n 25/40 very close big upps to both oh and best line:this kid triple N says he's good, and highly respected...... im not a polygraph,but his lies are very easily detected...
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06-05-04, 10:29 AM | #13 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
this kid triple N says he's good, and highly respected......
im not a polygraph,but his lies are very easily detected... you cant beat a good rapper,so put it on ya "wishlist"..... ur not sick, so change urcrew name to royal dickless...... "royal Sickness" signafies "the wackest mc'ees only"....... c'mon homie,"r.s." is done,so once again ur left lonely... you battled 38 times and your skill is that of a rookie...... keep fantasizing@ disastor,cuz ull never get any pussy.. ur a newbbatteler ,thats how you got the countless win.. i own you,thats y my dick in ya mouf and balls on ya chin... if weak rappin was a sin,your ass would go to "hell-son".... rhymin's ya life?,quit..and start singing with willy nelson.... your my lyrical slave... i got you scratchin my ball sack.... ill rip out ur spinal cord and lyrically lash u in the back..... i realize that u dont have a chance and prolly wont spit....... u in da lyrical sewer cuz ur verse will put u in 3 feet of shit.... .......hard punches iight flow good structure verse waz betta but triple n verse made alil more sense but shadow cam harder I'm amazed that he actually believes he gon win wit those played rhymes He's called "shadow" cuz his rhymes are a "step behind" the times He's got a vets rec, but he's nothing more than a novice Thats why he's "shadow" cuz he's never gon get noticed Were you potty trained, or are u jus somewhat mentally unfit Post ya rhymes in the bathroom please, cuz thats where u "drop shit!" This guy throws more shit than monkeys when they get frantic An full of enuff hot air to fly 4 people in a basket across the atlantic He dreams of being black, smokin' trees an speakin' some ebonics But reality is this bitch went to rehab when he got "Hooked on Phonics" verse waz ok but i heard sum of those punches be4 there kinda played out nice flow work on ya structure good battel and way by win shadow
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06-05-04, 10:04 PM | #14 | ||||
Miss Me?
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shadow - nice spit...good flow...funny punches...ur links helped the personals to points there....sum good and decent meta's....but ur punches were nice....and hit hard....good structure and okay wordplay...all i can give advice for u is on ur wordplay....so elevate on that....keep droppin...
triple_n - okay drop....seen better from u....see u played out his name....shoulda left it at the opener and came up wit different punches....closer was nice...but sum ur punches and meta's didnt click as the usually do....thats why u lost this one man....gotta come hard everytime.... vote - shadow
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06-06-04, 10:26 AM | #15 | |||
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Shadow got this.. heres how i break it down..
TRIPLE N - Ya drop was alright, i know even tho im new ive seen some better battles from you.. You had some alright punches fo sho.. and your structure was good ... Overall 7 / 10 SHADOW - Ya had a good spit, with nice punches, and funny onees at that.. The links made good enough personals... You had good structure, punches, and personals.. overall 8/10 Vote = Shadow.. |
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