aight 10 lines minimum. Souljah u go first bro.

lil keystyle........

all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//

I guess I'm the one merking the other cat to me you can't compare//
have two extra legs just to runaway from this battle like a chair//

battling cats not on your level is all you be doing on this site//
blah! the only way you elevate is flying a plane at full flight//

you probably be listening to Cass & Banks to see what to bite//
you fake emcees just go red instead of green like a traffic light//

you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//

not my best but whatever.........

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aight listen up imma do ma best.

Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/

Well ur not, u dont have good rhymes, ur wack/
And im gonna prove that/

Im sitting in front of my pc trying to think that ur not gonna beat me/
which u wont, im really not worried about that/

Your not immortal im gonna make sure of it/
im about to tk ur ass back into the past where u belong/

you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/

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ya i didnt really do all that great but nice battling ya. and its a damn shame i didnt even have 10 damn lines. its pitifull.

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ya my spit wasn't my best either but whatever good luck on this yo....

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ya u 2 bro. but im bouts to go to bed aights imma add ya to my buddy list if thats cool wit ya.

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yep its cool wit me................................................ ..........

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yo i wasnt feelin none yall i mean u both came weak sunded like it took u a while i think of ur rhymes but i am going to give this one to souljah boy right here his line was just a lil better than cannibal ohh and cannibal elevate more man cuz ur lines are pretty basic get more vocab in them and rhymes
v/souljah

okay I know I came weak..........well anywayz uppin for votes in the bitch!

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My vote goes to mortal he just planly took it all flow and punches

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all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//
aight.....no punch
I guess I'm the one merking the other cat to me you can't compare//
have two extra legs just to runaway from this battle like a chair//
aight......
battling cats not on your level is all you be doing on this site//
blah! the only way you elevate is flying a plane at full flight//
ok...nice punch
you probably be listening to Cass & Banks to see what to bite//
you fake emcees just go red instead of green like a traffic light//
ha ha ok
you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//
alright......ok closer

7/10
you had some punches no personals but you came harder than the next
verse im about to break down

Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/
ok.....NO
Well ur not, u dont have good rhymes, ur wack/
And im gonna prove that/
no punch....
Im sitting in front of my pc trying to think that ur not gonna beat me/
which u wont, im really not worried about that/
ok.....wheres the punch
Your not immortal im gonna make sure of it/
im about to tk ur ass back into the past where u belong/
this line didnt even ryhme.....
you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/
ok again....NO

elevate kid...thats all i got to say..work on your punches and personals
3.5/10


vote=IS

drop an honest one on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129783

ill do a vote on ^^^that one lata gotta go to school got a exam today

~I'm Out~

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uppin 4 sum muh'fuckin votes up in dis bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129834
vote on that..

IS took this for a better verse altogether.. punches hit pretty hard and flow was smooth..
CL your verse was ok but weak punches and flow was off...

VOTE.. Immortal_Souljah04...

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