lets go fam

10 lines
no dr cv or biting
no feeding
blind spit
1 hour to spit after check in
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

checkin in...imma drop now cuz im bored.................

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KiLlAh BwOy

dis lookz like a good battle ya need to hurry up n battle tho i'll vote wen ya do

in all of your Sen-ten-ces you always talk bout the benz-ya-in-
Really you poor kid..ya car is fake and you never seen a ben-ja-min-
flow is weak bout to merk-this-geek ya ass-cheeks and ya lack heat-
bars old like ancient antiques leave burn marks on da side of ya cheek-
spittin wack flows I rip and attack hoes rip out your back-bone-
bitch gettin ta-ckled drop my lines leave you with a cracked-toe-
get demolished n' ripped, get blown away by the gage-n' fifth-
kisin my shit? burn ya lips aint gettin picked up like a broken fork lift-
ge-tin clowned put da mic down kids tryna bite my shit like mike-now-
u wanna fight noq like comin to the stage, you gettin the light now-



thats it ma fuckaz i brought my old style back cuz ive peeped my shit and see ive fell off a bit..FUCK THAT IM BACK KIDS HAHAHA

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KiLlAh BwOy

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iight uppin........................................

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KiLlAh BwOy

in all of your Sen-ten-ces you always talk bout the benz-ya-in-
Really you poor kid..ya car is fake and you never seen a ben-ja-min-

Nice rhyming and personal...good opener


flow is weak bout to merk-this-geek ya ass-cheeks and ya lack heat-
bars old like ancient antiques leave burn marks on da side of ya cheek-

^^ Good flow..decent punch

spittin wack flows I rip and attack hoes rip out your back-bone-
bitch gettin ta-ckled drop my lines leave you with a cracked-toe-

^^ Nice rhyming..bordering on filler...a personal in there would have made it DOPE

get demolished n' ripped, get blown away by the gage-n' fifth-
kisin my shit? burn ya lips aint gettin picked up like a broken fork lift-

^^ AGain...nice flow..rhyming...punches are there...but border on filler

e-tin clowned put da mic down kids tryna bite my shit like mike-now-
u wanna fight noq like comin to the stage, you gettin the light now-

^^^ Dats nice...good closer

a virus on yo computer yo flow still want be sick....
u gettin swept in dis like the new york knicks.....

^^ Not feelin this...I'm also not feeling the way you centered your verse...kinda tacky

lyricks is crosseyed-off da page i see y u call it hipnotick.....
instead of killa it should be special K cuz yo flow is retarted...

^^ Ooooooh..dats hot...lol..best line of the battle so far

bow down bitch cuz u thru-scaratch yo head and wonder y newbs in yo crew...
take yo head offf yo shoulders,spit it back at u cuz u bassically juss got blew..

^^^ Nah...punch didn't have desired effect...u should have ended the 2nd line with the personal about news in the crew...dat woulda killed it...!!!

yo punches is neva connecting not even scratching my verse...
i reinverse,between u and andre3000 i dont kno whos the worste....


^^^ Not feeling this..blah..and what's wrong with Andre3000 besides the fact that he dresses like a drag queen?


disconnected,punches neva connected yo verse leavin me histicrcally.....
u juss been revocked damnn killah i killed u wit hipknotic strategies.....


^^ Rhyming is off..and does histicrcally mean hysterically?...um...eh closer


Polific...Killa dropped 1st...which, as we all know, meant that you could have studied his verse and came harder. You should have done that. Your verse had potential, including the best line in the battle with "special K"..However, 1 line doesn't make a battle. So, My vote has to go to Killa for being way more consistent throughout his verse than you were. YOu had this battle in the bad then blew it Pol.


srry...Vote: Killa...nice verses from both

PoLiFicK better flow and punches period. nice structure. i really like the way you went at puttin the punches and lyrics together.Killah Bwoy nice verse but he overpowered you lyrically. maybe you need to go back to the style that was gettin you wins.

vote=PoLiFicK

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

um.................ok there fam......lol..........uppin

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KiLlAh BwOy

Aight Killah


Killah-Hot ish...Both came tight you had the similies
and the metaphores..Balance was stabled and
everything went kindof hard and some in the
middle..Juss really nothing to work on
7/10

Polifick-You came aight too..But a
slight down this was a close battle
becuz you was right on his back..You had almost eveything
and the balance was close so really I give you a
6.8/10

v/Killah

Drop a vote in me vs E Looch please


Crew vote removed

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aight here we go
killa-had this wit his flow..punches..structure...vocab..wordplay,..and his multies killed it

p-u had nice flow but tha optha shit couldnt hold up to killa

open/killa
multies/killa
structure/killa
flow/both but better from killa
punches/killa
vocab/killa
finisher/killa
v/killa bwoy.. wun be easy niggas...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Flow: Killa
Structure: killa
punches:killa
Rhymes:killa
Humer: polifick

my vote goes 2 killa...polick u need 2 elevate on ya flow and ya structure isnt dat great but good shit 2 bof of yall good luck on all ya battles vote goes 2 KILLA

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

now i notice dat im black listed...so i cant vote....dats bullshit why peeps always blacklistin me dats not fair

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Killah Bwoy Killed Polifick in Personols Punches flow
he came away wit it and Structure
Polifick wtf kinda Structure was that huh

Well Heres a Break Down

Polifick

Flow 7/10
RhymeZ 6/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 5/10
Humer 7/10
32/50

Killah Bwoy

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 8/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 7/10
Humer 6/10
36/50

Good Verses From both Killah Bwoy but he came away wit it 1


V.Killah

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