10-16 lines
10 afta check in to spit
no d/r
no hate votes
no crew votes
no bitin

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

How about this...ill do only 6 lines u do 12 lines alright...??

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aight, that sounds good, wuteva just spit it, gotta go to wokr soon

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

yo.... 5 min have past and nuthins up, i gotta go soon so spit it, i might not have time to chek and see my feedbak afta i spit, but that kan be dun anutha time, spit man!

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

Nigga keep running off at ur mouth im gonna have to Murder YA//
This is the United States of America and we not scurd of Ya//
Come on kid ur rhymes and punches are elemantry and ur not the ONE//
Only time u winning a battle is when ur in the back yard playing wit Cap Gunz//
Way before the poll open and u attempt to drop a verse my killing spree BEGAN//
Fam ur not hott so stop,you could not even beat me if u had a Backup Man//

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aight yo, i gotta go in like 2 min. so ui'll spit an chek thiz out tomorrow

I'm gonna bust a rhyme wit nuttin but flow
Ur name iz KillaCamFlow, more like KillaKan'tGo

Therez no way u kan beat me, ur iscolated an i'm free
ur like preist in a church, i'm in the forest, a tree

i'm out in the open, an have the illes' rhymes in thiz battle
i'm gonna go see the cattle, an thiz one i'm gonna sattle

i'll ride ya like i ain't even tryin, u run to the barn all cryin
i'll kik ya in the ass, get ma gun, bitch u dyin.... i'm gonna be flyin

then i'm gonna see u in hell as u still cryin kuza this loss
i heard frum u that while u in bed, u do nuttin but toss

havin nightmares at the memory
don't worry, ur now in a cemetary

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

iight fam u got 5 misn to drop man come on god i had to keystyle that butt shitt right theree but it still gona win me i did it in about 7 mins

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aight ppl, were dun an i NEED FEEDBAK to get betta, so ppl read an post then vote

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

Do nto worrie fam ill help you along the way do nto worrie

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ur doing better man.u did not beat me but...ur doing much better keep the work up...make ur lines a lil bit more longer and more complex use better vocab and ur gonna be a good writer iight

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aiight TheOne your opener made me believe that you would kill this battle hott shyt but then the rest was filler you was just saying anything and you was talking about yourself more than your opponent never do that...you had no good punches or woredplay or multies structure and flow was decent but besides the opener your verse was preety weak...you need to focus more on punches and personals say more stuff about your opponent..

overall : 3/10

KillaCamFlow:

you had a decent opener good play off of where he lives so str8 personal...the cap gunz...win a battle line was kinda weak...but decent punch...but i think your finisher took this battle..killing spree began...backup man hott shyt right there...you still need to elevate on personals and better wordplay and multies...you had a couple decent multies and good flow...decent structure

overall: 6/10

vote: KillaCamFlow

~!1!~

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Nigga keep running off at ur mouth im gonna have to Murder YA//
This is the United States of America and we not scurd of Ya//
decent flow, good multi... needs some wordplay or a good punch too make it a good opener though
Come on kid ur rhymes and punches are elemantry and ur not the ONE//
Only time u winning a battle is when ur in the back yard playing wit Cap Gunz//
weak punch, decent vocab
Way before the poll open and u attempt to drop a verse my killing spree BEGAN//
Fam ur not hott so stop,you could not even beat me if u had a Backup Man//
This was another weak punchline, I think this verse kinda lacked in intensity, but all in all it wasn't too bad just work on more solid punches and try and include more multis in ur flow.


I'm gonna bust a rhyme wit nuttin but flow
Ur name iz KillaCamFlow, more like KillaKan'tGo
This was kinda funny... decent opener it would have been better if you used KillaCamFlow in the first line, used a multi in the first syllables of the second line and ended it the way you did, but it was decent.
Therez no way u kan beat me, ur iscolated an i'm free
ur like preist in a church, i'm in the forest, a tree
this was kinda weak, the flow was o.k but very basic no punches

i'm out in the open, an have the illes' rhymes in thiz battle
i'm gonna go see the cattle, an thiz one i'm gonna sattle
??-- this doesn't really make any sense, your not really directly saying anything on your opponent- you need to use less filler rhymes and actually say something that has substance
i'll ride ya like i ain't even tryin, u run to the barn all cryin
i'll kik ya in the ass, get ma gun, bitch u dyin.... i'm gonna be flyin
nah man-- this just aint workin... Im not trying to be an ass but I think you would learn alot by reading the tutorials on this sight.
then i'm gonna see u in hell as u still cryin kuza this loss
i heard frum u that while u in bed, u do nuttin but toss

havin nightmares at the memory
don't worry, ur now in a cemetary- I think if you got more descriptive with your verses and actually used punchlines you would have won this battle, but your flow didn't have any solid punches and didn't really have much substance... My vote goes to KillaCam.

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Yo my vote goes to Killa on this shit... heres why...

YO One.. stop with the I'll do this and i'll do that shit.. its not how u win battles.. you need to elevate, and incorperate mad punches to even stand a chance against Killa..

Killa you had a good verse.. nice punches, and personals... overall by far the better spit..

Vote.. Killa no doubt

Aiight The one you had one good punch at the beggining but it went to shit after that. WEak and I struggled to understand most of ya lyrics. The cattle and tree lines make me want to kill you.

Kill ay a had a weak verse butit was understood and landed even if they were soft.

Both of yuo had ok structure n flow

Vote killa

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