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j.smith hk,la,f4 1 16.67%
DeLeon 5 83.33%
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Old 06-08-04, 10:44 AM   #1
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
j.smith hk,la,f4 Vs. DeLeon

IP: 856D D1D1

alright house rules
12 lines
your dropin first
verse due 20 mins after you check in....
same for me after you drop yours i got 20 mins
to the voters....you need 85 posts to vote on this
 
Old 06-08-04, 10:55 AM   #2
j.smith hk,la,f4
Flyweight
 
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From: CALI, 101ST AND VERMONT
IP: 3DE7 7685

Chucks In Nigga Lets Go
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Old 06-08-04, 10:59 AM   #3
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
IP: 856D D1D1

checkin.....You got 20 mins to drop your shit
 
Old 06-08-04, 11:17 AM   #4
j.smith hk,la,f4
Flyweight
 
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From: CALI, 101ST AND VERMONT
IP: 3DE7 7685

Rough in text, that'll crush a vet from head to rear
Rap's sad from being wack,therefore it sheds a Tear
This guy's soft cuts will be easily blazed..I toss sluts
But, your gender's like a wedding bouquet..a toss up
Kids trust my hardest threw punches will startle you
This garbage dude? set flame to his grill like a barbecue
Take apart ya crew so no need for them to hype ya shit
On a fly team..now on the sideline, this kid's Micheal Vick
No disrespect but you've just been alarmed..I'm the best
Jump on stage against me and break a leg, arm and a neck
You used to be on top of your game now there's a problem
Now so below it..you'd have to jump to reach the bottom!!
Once a champ but to me your never kept the throne
Ya verses can rock a crowd..to me they just a stepping stone
Wreck ya dome to leave the swelling on ya head massive
Lyrically I can't see you...thats cause your never active
Remeber who did this to you..I don't need disguise
Fist packin' heat that'll turn your lungs into Freedom Fires
Yeah I see ya pride and I'll attack until you it drops man
With scripts too tight for Wrists ..like small watch bands..

I HAD TO EXCEED I WAS IN A ZONE
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Old 06-08-04, 11:20 AM   #5
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
IP: 856D D1D1

you did 20 lines instead of 12.....your DQ'ed.........Just playing ha ha
alright i'll drop mine in 20
 
Old 06-08-04, 11:37 AM   #6
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
IP: 856D D1D1

Just watch how my hot flows puts a stop to this gay..//
The garbage truck stopped by and j's got what it takes//
and you ain’t been through nothin but the bushy fro on your mama's pussyhole//
U-ain’t seen no pain n strife! so how you a gangsta yo//
J.Smiths out of style and out of date, its all played shit..//
The one time you dropped a "Goodbar" you picked it back up and ate it//
This joke is spitting useless bars wit no ammo tryna shoot-for-stars//
and your sickness only Lasting For a minute like you-was-Sar's…//
your flow got more fucken holes than the O-Zone
J's is like a "Disconneted Cable"..u only see him in "No Shows"//
You a "Soft Thug Wannabe" u aint a glowin kat that empties gatz//
Only time you ever "Hustle for Cream" is openin a "Hostess Pack"//
 
Old 06-08-04, 12:01 PM   #7
j.smith hk,la,f4
Flyweight
 
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From: CALI, 101ST AND VERMONT
IP: 3DE7 7685

Uppin
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Old 06-08-04, 12:33 PM   #8
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
IP: 6247 B101

Uppin for some votes...
 
Old 06-08-04, 01:43 PM   #9
Black Haze
Banned: Cheating
 
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IP: 1FC5 6BEB

ayo ima hav to giv dis shyt to deleon he came out n jus ripped shyt holla but newayz good shyt j smith u need to elevate a bit na mean good lines but i jus think deleon came out on top n ripped shyt he had sum sick punches much respek to both of ya.

deleons best line-J.Smiths out of style and out of date, its all played shit..//
The one time you dropped a "Goodbar" you picked it back up and ate it//


j smiths best line-Kids trust my hardest threw punches will startle you
This garbage dude? set flame to his grill like a barbecue
 
Old 06-08-04, 04:04 PM   #10
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
IP: 6247 B101

alright lets get some more votes up in here.......
 
Old 06-08-04, 05:34 PM   #11
j.smith hk,la,f4
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From: CALI, 101ST AND VERMONT
IP: 3DE7 7685

uppin for more votes
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Old 06-08-04, 05:51 PM   #12
j.smith hk,la,f4
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Uppin
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Old 06-08-04, 06:41 PM   #13
reddot06
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alright D got this one... he had some great punches... and he just came harder... i think D is back to his old self... j smith u came good just not as hard vote goes to D
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Old 06-08-04, 07:33 PM   #14
Pop Lotty
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From: Jerz.....
IP: A406 1C51

opener:deleon...came wit a nice lil punch in his
closer:deleon...anothe nice punch...J i aint kno wut the fuck scripts and wrisks had to do wit eachother...no real wordplay in that one
punches:both were pretty decent in this category, although deleon had some played ones he came wit the one that hit harder like...

J.Smiths out of style and out of date, its all played shit..//
The one time you dropped a "Goodbar" you picked it back up and ate it//

You a "Soft Thug Wannabe" u aint a glowin kat that empties gatz//
Only time you ever "Hustle for Cream" is openin a "Hostess Pack"//
those were his best...
and j came wit one that hit hard...

Kids trust my hardest threw punches will startle you
This garbage dude? set flame to his grill like a barbecue<---hot..but thats about it

flow:J cause he came wit the multis that made it flow better
vote:deleon..he came harder in most categories, includin the punches
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Old 06-08-04, 08:04 PM   #15
For$akeN
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Just watch how my hot flows puts a stop to this gay..//
The garbage truck stopped by and j's got what it takes//
and you ain’t been through nothin but the bushy fro on your mama's pussyhole//
U-ain’t seen no pain n strife! so how you a gangsta yo//
J.Smiths out of style and out of date, its all played shit..//
The one time you dropped a "Goodbar" you picked it back up and ate it//
This joke is spitting useless bars wit no ammo tryna shoot-for-stars//
and your sickness only Lasting For a minute like you-was-Sar's…//
your flow got more fucken holes than the O-Zone
J's is like a "Disconneted Cable"..u only see him in "No Shows"//
You a "Soft Thug Wannabe" u aint a glowin kat that empties gatz//
Only time you ever "Hustle for Cream" is openin a "Hostess Pack"//

whoa nice drop^^^DeLeon

so read it and say he merked J........................overall he had
much harder hitting punches his drop stayed tight from start to
finish.....he had good flow also vote goes toeLeon
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