y'all no the killah wants another win so here what it is:
no dick riding no hating no crew: votes
15-20 lines
no biting or prewitten shit

lets go hoe
you spit first

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Ayo I spit flames to break ya back// my ryhmes hit full force like an old mans heart attack// you don't want it wit D//I'm da one to shake ya life up,blow ya brains out leave em in ya mommas tip cup// AKA i know why ya name like dat// ya formally a bitch waitin to get ya teeth smacked//don't fight dat i've been gangsta bitch and u ain't shit//you betta off like a hooker and suckin my dick// ya shit couldn't be hard if u had viagra behind it// I'll cut ya head off and let ya mommas bitch ass find it// Then i'll come back 4 her ass then dice her wit glass// slit her fuckin throat and throw her body parts in da trash//Then come 2 her funeral and blow up ya casket u fuckin dirty bastard//

ayo your ass talking like y'all an o.g.s(original gangstas)//
but my crew will take your dead body out like grosiers(supermarket shit probably spelled wrong)//
ayo this cat acting like i'm afraid of DNyce//
But the only way he gonna shine is stepping into the reflection of my ice//
dawg you gonna hang down further than my necklace//
y you talking about guns when you teckless//
can just because i haven't taken off your head doesn't mean your on my resect list//
aka stand for a killin asshole cause i'm about to kill this asshole//
the only way you living is if you sell your soul//
look at what it says above your avatar "new to rapbattles"//
this site is for big boys go back to your mothers tits and your rattles//
oh and by the the way//
i don't no if you are but your mom is srceaming aka//
matter a fact i aint heard anyone give you props//
a dawg like me got you, your ma, and your pops//
calling out my name like damn he so good//
what the fuck you thinking you house aint your hood//

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Both rapperz came pretty weak, I was expecting something interesting... Dnyce came gangsta as f*ck wit a few good bars, but everything else was mediocre and done already. I thought Aka was gonna take it easily but he was wack. He was talkin but not sayin nuttin at all. So Dnyce takes this one by far... ya both keep doing ya thing

winner...... DNyce

uppin the votes...................................

Ayo I spit flames to break ya back// my ryhmes hit full force like an old mans heart attack// you don't want it wit D//I'm da one to shake ya life up,blow ya brains out leave em in ya mommas tip cup// AKA i know why ya name like dat// ya formally a bitch waitin to get ya teeth smacked//don't fight dat i've been gangsta bitch and u ain't shit//you betta off like a hooker and suckin my dick// ya shit couldn't be hard if u had viagra behind it// I'll cut ya head off and let ya mommas bitch ass find it// Then i'll come back 4 her ass then dice her wit glass// slit her fuckin throat and throw her body parts in da trash//Then come 2 her funeral and blow up ya casket u fuckin dirty bastard//

^^^ d-nice what the fuck is that its not a batle verse more like a paragraph
u need better flow and punches better strucutre and personals
overall *5* you need to work omn dis more^
cuz i garemntee with out personals u wont win and all this^ loost u the battle
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ayo your ass talking like y'all an o.g.s(original gangstas)//
but my crew will take your dead body out like grosiers(supermarket shit probably spelled wrong)//
ayo this cat acting like i'm afraid of DNyce//
But the only way he gonna shine is stepping into the reflection of my ice//
dawg you gonna hang down further than my necklace//
y you talking about guns when you teckless//
can just because i haven't taken off your head doesn't mean your on my resect list//
aka stand for a killin asshole cause i'm about to kill this asshole//
the only way you living is if you sell your soul//
look at what it says above your avatar "new to rapbattles"//
this site is for big boys go back to your mothers tits and your rattles//
oh and by the the way//
i don't no if you are but your mom is srceaming aka//
matter a fact i aint heard anyone give you props//
a dawg like me got you, your ma, and your pops//
calling out my name like damn he so good//
what the fuck you thinking you house aint your hood//
aka u need to work onb structure also and flow ur punches were there
but get some more personals and ull be good
overall *6*
just a step ahead of him ..
my vote aka
becuz he came harder and all around better

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I do not no I have to go with AKA becuase he had a much more better flow and his lyrics I believe laid more punches and his closure was iight I believe so my vote goes aith aka.

ayo comon we ain't done yet keep voting

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aight aight... well A.K.A. took this shit easy basically because DNyce
made his structure into a paragraph & wasn't flowing right for me....
A.K.A. had all around better punches & flow, vocab you name it.

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keep voting i want to get this over with so i can move on to another battle

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murder she wrote word this was a slature um Aka had way more punches personals every thing this kid didnt have my vote goes to akk

v/aka

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