rules:i spit first 30 mins.
no d/r,hate,or crew votes
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swampsouljah707 = soldiersnake = dqed for cheating

aight
u droppin first...ok
i'll drop afta u
im checkin in
~1~

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

yo check it.....

ima show dis blaq-ink some *black magic*
ima laugh when dis fuckin fag sinks like *titanic*
ima havoc and you cant beat me cuz im *raisin hell*
after dis battle i might spend a couple *days in jail*
what i think is that yo rhymes reek matter fact,they *stink*
you dont even need a pen and pad stop wastin *ink*
you cant even keep it real boy,cuz you just a *real girl*
or maybe bi or plain gay like them dudes on *real world*
im keepin it real kid you just a anotha *fake*
goin against me,you just made your biggest *mistake*

battlein me is a job that will clout and leave u more disfigured than a pigs snout
swamp gettin smacked outta classroom windows and he calls him self a high school drop out.

u cant see u've been out-classed u'll need ur ass out of the solar system jus to make ur shit universal
set your pre-penciled lines and im reverseing ya ryhmes 2 where u hit yourself during rehearsal

every punch u throw u missin cause i have slick vision
bars hit u thick incisions, divide ur brain in 2, and have u makeing split decisions

leave u like a pussy that matserbated wit a chain saw, ripped apart
cant say u fell off,cause u never had a handle on hip-hop from ya jump start

if u back talk me i'll rip ya tounge out ya mouf so u betta watch what u say
spit bacteria in ya toungeless mouf and let ya jar decay

theres no way this fake soulja winning this battle
cause from where im standing ya ass look more shook than a babies rattle

so i hope u representing well cause i'll murder u and send ya punk ass back to v-town
have u and ya niggaz smile shape like a nike sign upside down

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

3=ko
4 votes is a win
aight nice battle uppin for votes

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

yo come dont sleep on this
we need som votes yall come-on
uppin for votes=0-0

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

wow what a battle. I have to go with swamp tho becuase his flow was awesome and his rhyming was crazy.
so my vote goes to swamp
hit up on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385

v/swamp because his flow was better and his punches was bettter

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disagree here....
i vote blaq cuz you had way more word play in there
- lines wer a lil long but it all came together, just concetrate on your structure..
vote: blaq-ink

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quote your own damn lyrics...

1-2
uppin for more votes
swamp=2 votes
ink=1 vote

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

yo com on we some votes
help us out niggaz
drop ya votez
~1~

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

c'mon yall uppin this battle ^^^^^so we can close dis thread peace out

now blaq-ink did a good job on wordplay and thats about it and swamp had a good flow,punches,and it was easier to read so vote goes to swamp

vote=swampsouljah707