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Old 06-08-04, 09:55 AM   #1
SpokenBluntly
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Its da female bandit and I have officially Landed/
Not candid but I leave most lyrical emcees STOPPED and strandid/
The female version of Hova and that's for serious/
My lyrical apperance Is enuff to stamp me as utterly Ridiculas/
This hear is my checkerd flag and IM SPEEDING/
THis is something u are forced to *believe in* making sure to gain respect AND THEN IM LEAVING/
Leaving you cats worried and sexual studied like a rape victim/
Consider me wired cuz i got more Bugs then ya computer system/
After u get used to me you'll be abusing me like crack/
ME BEING WACK AS FUCK not even KODACK could photo that/
Im an american tradition like *butter spread on toast*/
I MAKE the heat in ya kitchen im scraping you *making you shed the most*/
FIRE RAP IGNITIONS LIKE REMY MARTIN/
U ready to rumble get humble and find ya face on a milk Cartin/
SpokenBluntly the femcee with net and streets cradentials/
FUck wat u been through Glue u still in ur tracks every time i spit its INFLUENTIALS/


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Old 06-08-04, 07:46 PM   #2
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ur flow was offin 2 spots
ur structure needs work that would help ur flow
and butter on toast thats corny lol
pretty nice drop
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Old 06-08-04, 07:49 PM   #3
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good....
i found the structre fine
and the flow was excellent atleast i didn't notice where it was off maybe it was just your dilect you where saying it in will

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Old 06-08-04, 10:30 PM   #4
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lol i know my flow was scraight (i don't really pay attention to her replys..she has no creditals) but thanks for da ups *ONES*

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Old 06-09-04, 01:34 AM   #5
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ur fukin stupid sb
i gave u a nice fedback
how does ridiculous
and serious rhyme?
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Old 06-09-04, 02:17 AM   #6
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bad structer needs werk......................
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Old 06-09-04, 05:49 PM   #7
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thanks for ur opinions *ONES*

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