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Old 01-03-05, 04:38 PM   #1
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Exclamation lyrical shocker

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I spit rhymes that makes kids commit crimes i've done it a million times and i'll

do it again and i don't need a paper or pen, my keyboard is my sword and

this site is my stable, it's the only place i know where i'm able to throw my

thoughts on the table, this song comes as a shock u could tell by the label,

ya'll spit shit but in real life your just a weak tit, here i'll give u a tip, don't

slip or trip when u let her rip, and when they talk shit bout u make sure to

flip the script, leave them split, slit and left with a bloody fat lip, i do shit

u only see on Tales of The Crypt, I'm always set to throw verses on the net

that'll leave a normal person dead the only color around will be the red of

the blood u just bled, i've been leaving people warned and torn ever since the

day i was born i'm more evil than Children of The Corn, so it's alrite if your

scared like anyone else i'll leave your vision impaired, u couldn't even battle

me if u were dared, i'll walk over u like beaches and i only rap because ya'll

suck more than leeches i'm so high on top that i'm out of your reaches, ya'll

think you're hard but really your as soft as peaches, u rapperz won't even

believe this cuz i'll puncture anything with this structure i'll impress any

inspector with a rhyme layed down on a smooth texture, when it comes

to this i'm smarter than Dexter on Cartoon Network so much that i just have

to sit and smirk while i continue with my work, I'm part of the new trend,

i stick out from the rest of the blend but now there's no more ways to make

this bend so now u just read the end because this is where i just pushed send

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Old 01-03-05, 09:32 PM   #2
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let's get some feedback on this, the feedback is what counts not just posting
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Old 01-04-05, 07:15 AM   #3
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nice drop.....................keep doin yo thing..............................yo an from a friend learn how ta write in bar form....
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Old 01-04-05, 01:45 PM   #4
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thanx i apreciate it butwhat exactly is bar form??
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Old 01-04-05, 06:21 PM   #5
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yo i didnt really like this no hate but dont just say shit that rhymes and a bar is

blah blha bidy boo bdoahsk djdkash dkfjfgh
njkdjnfdkj lkjdklsjfkljfrkl ijdjljflkjrfeljroijf opjro

bar^
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Old 01-04-05, 11:52 PM   #6
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yo i didnt really like this no hate but dont just say shit that rhymes and a bar is

blah blha bidy boo bdoahsk djdkash dkfjfgh
njkdjnfdkj lkjdklsjfkljfrkl ijdjljflkjrfeljroijf opjro

bar^


i'm not startin nuthin but what the fuck u think rap is, rhyming and nuthin else if it doesn't rhyme then it's not a rap and anybody would agree with me
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