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01-03-05, 04:38 PM | #1 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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lyrical shocker
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I spit rhymes that makes kids commit crimes i've done it a million times and i'll
do it again and i don't need a paper or pen, my keyboard is my sword and this site is my stable, it's the only place i know where i'm able to throw my thoughts on the table, this song comes as a shock u could tell by the label, ya'll spit shit but in real life your just a weak tit, here i'll give u a tip, don't slip or trip when u let her rip, and when they talk shit bout u make sure to flip the script, leave them split, slit and left with a bloody fat lip, i do shit u only see on Tales of The Crypt, I'm always set to throw verses on the net that'll leave a normal person dead the only color around will be the red of the blood u just bled, i've been leaving people warned and torn ever since the day i was born i'm more evil than Children of The Corn, so it's alrite if your scared like anyone else i'll leave your vision impaired, u couldn't even battle me if u were dared, i'll walk over u like beaches and i only rap because ya'll suck more than leeches i'm so high on top that i'm out of your reaches, ya'll think you're hard but really your as soft as peaches, u rapperz won't even believe this cuz i'll puncture anything with this structure i'll impress any inspector with a rhyme layed down on a smooth texture, when it comes to this i'm smarter than Dexter on Cartoon Network so much that i just have to sit and smirk while i continue with my work, I'm part of the new trend, i stick out from the rest of the blend but now there's no more ways to make this bend so now u just read the end because this is where i just pushed send Last edited by hood_dawg : 01-04-05 at 12:31 AM. |
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01-03-05, 09:32 PM | #2 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
let's get some feedback on this, the feedback is what counts not just posting
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01-04-05, 07:15 AM | #3 | ||||
Welcome 2 Dope South
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nice drop.....................keep doin yo thing..............................yo an from a friend learn how ta write in bar form....
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01-04-05, 01:45 PM | #4 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
thanx i apreciate it butwhat exactly is bar form??
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01-04-05, 06:21 PM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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yo i didnt really like this no hate but dont just say shit that rhymes and a bar is
blah blha bidy boo bdoahsk djdkash dkfjfgh njkdjnfdkj lkjdklsjfkljfrkl ijdjljflkjrfeljroijf opjro bar^ |
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01-04-05, 11:52 PM | #6 | ||||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
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i'm not startin nuthin but what the fuck u think rap is, rhyming and nuthin else if it doesn't rhyme then it's not a rap and anybody would agree with me |
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