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Old 06-07-04, 02:59 AM   #1
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Cool fresh n nu

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ima buss dis crazy freestyle//
leave ur mind feelin wild//
its simple n easy to do//
well it is for me i aint sure bout u//
can u do this do u hav a clue//
or r u gunna get ripped n more ripped thru//
u aint shit dont deny u no its true//
so sit back n accept im u word b fore shit im the new//
rollin wit or without a crew//
i dont matter ill stil buss a cap thru u n ya nephew//
sik lyrics//
leave u in hysterics//
this ritual//
sensatiaonal//
continual//
i keep on go//
u love ma flo//
there isnt no way u gunna say no//
so lets back to this shizle//
u ask for sum bizle//
now no1 want the new kid//
the rip rite thru kid//
fendin off all ova shit//
ill kill u//
thrill u//
so bad they'll have to conceal u//
n heal u//
back to full strength//
ill run ya temper to the full length//
make sure u on da edge//
cant beat me im nu n im the best//
keepin each coast flavour fresh//
neva make a bad beat//
wen ballin ill clown u feet//
u gone wanna a receat//
or compensation//
for makin u have to use medication//
look at u glasses on tryni to get ma car registration//
im not n iduvidual//
im an idependent spiritual//
mirical//
ma rhymes n ma flow make me lyrical//
u gunna need a post mortem//
cos u a lost cause of..//
death//
u no hus next//
u no wen im vexed//
u better run like da rest//
far far west//
further then californi-A//
cos thts where i play//
n if u a animal u hear ma shit ur fur will frey//
so u better not come to me best to stay away//


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Old 06-07-04, 09:01 AM   #2
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weak overall wack as hell needs some major elevation it is veryu newbish go to tutorials cuz u havent improved since the beginning..............
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Old 06-07-04, 11:40 AM   #3
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man will u stop cussin ma shit man
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Old 06-07-04, 11:58 AM   #4
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it was pretty wack...
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Old 06-07-04, 12:23 PM   #5
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im givin u feedback so u elevate which obviosly u havent yet...................................
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Old 06-07-04, 12:57 PM   #6
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serious elevation needed, dat so jst wack
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