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Old 06-06-04, 09:09 PM   #1
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unholy wun vs. mixxed mc

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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
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Old 06-06-04, 10:56 PM   #2
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Check.
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Old 06-07-04, 01:11 AM   #3
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Check

Am i that good too battle all good people lol


2-1 thas pretty good

Well at Least Unholy wun aint a bitch lol 1 checkin in
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Old 06-08-04, 03:11 PM   #4
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Spittin Way Early Dont matter got the time do it right 1

Yo Punchez Quick But will Leave u wit a definit Scar...
For UnHolyWun Beatin me is gonna me Extremly Hard...
Cause Kid Look im The 1 To Take out this Rap Game...
Battlein me ill leave this kid Flipped like his own Name...
Matter-a-fact Killin this Coward mc aint' nuttin for me...
Punch connect i left this bitch Parrlayzed from his head 2 Knee...
He Still Chouldint beat me if he got to write Chapters...
N-Sight n him complain who got more money on Rapperz...
A little Childish Like But Who Give's a Fuck...
Bring the Money around me now this bitch is Stuck...
The 1 Word Describes un-holy-wun this Trick just Suck's...
Now Act like u on a dogg now lets see u flee...
yo if this kid had two verse's he still chouldint beat me...
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Old 06-08-04, 08:28 PM   #5
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Ight..

This kid couldnt Dodge My Rams if he was Powered By a Hemi..
Punches Thrown Backwards they dont evan Try to Hit-Me..
Young Buck Should Be Embarrased the Way u rep him in ur Sig..
Ur in the Basment Of Rap ur a Mini-Me of the Great Big Tig..
False Accusation's of Being a Legend Is Just Insane..
Ur Flow is Slow like a Cloaged Faucet Mines Pourin Rain..
You couldnt be Big on The "Web" if u were Spider-Man..
Your Meek Lyrics are Boring to Read But u do what u Can..
Is it Punches u Seek Well Here ill Knock u Off ur Feet..
U Couldnt Come hard if u were On Viagra Ready To Skeet..
Load the Cannon and Blast This Kid Outta-Here..
Can u Not Hear Ur Ending of Relaunched is Near..

Here u go...Uppin.
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Old 06-09-04, 12:16 AM   #6
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OMFG
I thought unholy wun was good.
loool
and mixxed mc sucked too.
both came with extremely played lines.
like unholy, the "you couldnt come hard" line is played out.
Cum lines are played.
none of your verse as nice.

mixxed,came weak as hell too. and his opener didnt even make sense. he was dissing himself.
the only good line from mixxed was the name flip one.
otherwise that, his verse sucked too.
v/unholywun for makin more sense.
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Old 06-09-04, 03:16 AM   #7
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blah. unholy wins for some attempts at wordplay... the opener alone was enough to win this one. i think though that almost every concept (if you can even say mixed used concepts) was pretty played. you guys have to really up it.

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Yo Punchez Quick But will Leave u wit a definit Scar...
For UnHolyWun Beatin me is gonna me Extremly Hard..."

^ wtf... you saying hes gonna beat you??!?
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Old 06-09-04, 08:08 AM   #8
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v/ Unholy One.

Here`s two verses that wont be featured in Top 10 Punches eh Shadow?

Alot of generic, vague, played disses.. felt UO was less so.. punches were slightly more effective an consistantly better than his opponents.
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Old 06-09-04, 09:51 PM   #9
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look i was on my momz computer and she wanted to go on i met

Yo My Punchez Quick And will Leave u wit a definit Scar...
this bitch UnHolyWun for him Beatin me is gonna be Extremly Hard..."
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Old 06-10-04, 11:01 PM   #10
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damn it this was a weak battle!!!

i give it to unholy wun
i think shadow said it all. there was nuthin original at all just a bunch of weak ass played concepts. i think unholy though was less weak than mixxed who didn't seem to drop anythin worth readin. there is no hate here, but u two seriously do need to up ure game or u will drop in the ranks quickly.

V/ - UnHoly Wun
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Old 06-10-04, 11:06 PM   #11
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Lol did i try?I read his and dropped ish.
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Old 06-10-04, 11:15 PM   #12
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this was a weak battle.....but ima vote....
mixxed...to tell u the truth i wasnt feelin ur verse at all it flowed but i think it lacked in wordplay and personals...cuz at one point i thought u were dissin ur self...overall 4/10

Unholy......ur verse was ok but not great ....i liked ur opening wit the hemi....that was pretty cool...fuck it overall u had the better verse better wordplay so u get my vote

Vote=Unholy
 
Old 06-13-04, 07:48 AM   #13
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breakdown for mixxed mc:

flowretty straight forward nothing special as far as structure goes workin for what it was though 5.5/10

volcab:basic array nothing advance here 5/10

punches:you addressed him everyone nothing i saw too strong though alot of just i'ma kick his ass type lines more then anything 6/10

overall:16.5/30

breakdown for unholy wun:

flow:basic nothing complex same as your oppenent 5.5/10

volcab:edged out mixxed i think still not overly amazing though 6/10

punches:some alright lines nothing too new and anything but it all worked well my fav,"You couldnt be Big on The "Web" if u were Spider-Man.." good job 7/10

overall:18.5/30

vote--unholy wun
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Old 06-13-04, 08:08 PM   #14
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6-0 unholy wun wins
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