I'll do My verse 2morrow, right now Im sick ass fuck, sorry. Just give me some time dawg k. thanks. I were on my life that it wont be prewritten yo, so dont worry about that.

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guyz,while u waitn to battle, can yall vote on 1, or all if u want of my battles below, i'll return tha same, if u vote for one, ill vote for this one, if u vote for all 3, ima vote for all three, so hit me bac, and if u do vote, just pm me afterward and i'll get back to ya.

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I aint gonna call U hindo or shit like them other niggaz I saw U battle. Obiously Iv seen Ur mugshots. I know U Indian, and black so I wont get it twizted. To all You'll waiting for this battle. sorry for my prolonging the shit. I still feel messed up but fuk it. Its a battle, not a day care center. So wit out furder adue, lets do this.

this lil nigga is calm, cool, and collected/
but my heater'll having em lookin for body parts in defferent county secters/
my words'll make sesspools out this lil' Tadpole befor he even grows hair on his 14 yr old testicles/
grab a gat and trenchcoat, and track U down when U at school/
Then give U a weggy and hang Ur dumb ass upside down off the school flag pole/
cuz U wont last thru, an attack that'll levitate and blast U in all courners that U chill at/
have Ur crack selling homies, hillusinating and asking " did U feel that?/
cuz hybrids get ran up on, next thing U know U getting peeled back/
scraped off the floor wit a spatula the size of a manhole/
I spit first so U could bite my rymes and get putaway like Hannibal/
makeing Ur inside completely unmanegable/
White blood cells ask, when is Eye gonna finish ripping this asshole, while they got they shit packed/
My rymes'll smack Spuls' spine yellow, so let me rip em while he's still black/
Indian family members comfused, asking "whys lil' Pully in a body bag? and all over the news on Comcast?"/
(this is Local cable)

Cuz my verbal attacks impail wordz thru U bitches/
Aim for Ur legs, Put Ur style in a wheel chair and It still aint this gifted/
I stole the mic from U like another missdressed misstress wit no strings attached and big Tits/ ( cordless mic wit a bit top)
Im here to punch U in chest so hard, Ur heart'll ask "whys he comin after me for?"/
then crack Ur chest cavitity on the floor while ur ribs tide to the bumper of my 4 door Hunda Accord/
Draging U off the floor while scoping the ambulances back door wit a 4' 4'/
then rip Ur soul out Ur nipples, while U weir Ur heart at Ur sleave...Literly/
I'll eat U to peices and spit U back in Ur mothers face at the dinner table bitterly/
I flip battles like boats in Heavy Rain, plus Mc's be left dwindling/
Who ordered Personal survice? cuz here comes the pain in more then one way like syninims/

Theres my first verse, good luk nigga.

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If theres something U dont understand, I'll explain it. Just ask rather then jump to conclusions.

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U guys gotta wait till we both spit our 2 verses to vote. if not, then this whole shit'll just fall apart.

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I cant believe U opened Ur mouth, and started spittin sappy shit/
cuz Ur flows like Piss, coming out a pussy wit flappy lips/
That Eye Joke was Garbage, plus Ur metaphores are falling off/
He on my dick so much, Im surprised He hasnt askd me to caugh/
No real thugs get mad and adds the prase "wicked tight" when he's nervouse wit no clue/
Goodthing U know surgery, now U can stitch Up ur structure in the Emergency Room/
so why U scared for, is it cuz I blaze U like bagz of Indo?/
Is it cuz Ur style is so stolen, U had to spit it at me through the window?/
I'll do U like Torry James(the football player) and dislocate Ur shin bones/
then rob Ur radio while Ur boomin my single/
cuz my shit is slicker than Al Sharptons Head piece, plus I pop niggaz like pimples/
which means that I can have niggaz rappin Ur head up like Andre and Erika baddu/
It aint cheating, its hypnotic slang mixxed wit melodic voodoo thats been banging at U/
EyeDentdy Piles bodies at Ur doorstep like I work for Truith/
^ ^
(those niggaz making comercials against tabacco)

I'll Do like Tom cruise in last Samurai, and make U kill Ur own troops/
I got this nigga like Colin Farel, too shook to leave the recording booth/

thats my second one, yo Spul. try this time nigga.

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eyedenty: your first verse wasnt too hott i think it lacked almost everywhere...punches were decent but none were really that hard...sometime your verse was complex others it was too simple...as for your second verse you opened up the rhyme scheme and came hotter...2nd verse was way better than the 1st....the thing you need to work on most tho is the structure its all over the place...one line is short and the next line is way too long even them up and youll do better

overall : 14/20

spul your first verse was decent good punches a couple ok personals between both verses...pretty good structure it was choppy in maybe 1 or 2 spots but overall you held it together...good wordplay and flow...everything stayed pretty consistent.....i dont think u had that many hard hitting punches either but you had more than eye did...so that gives you an advantage in this battle...you lacked in the personals tho usually u do alot of hott personals not that many this time around in either verse

overall : 17/20

vote: Spul

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to me this was one sided... eye you came close, but you didnt really come close... i think the only reason you got that close is because spul didnt really flow like he was tryna beat sumone better then him... 2 verses yikes heh..

Eye: it seemed like in places you set up what could potentially be a nice lil jab, but then when i read the next line, you let it down... you jsut need to work on connecting it.. liek this line right here:
Cuz my verbal attacks impail wordz thru U bitches/
Aim for Ur legs, Put Ur style in a wheel chair and It still aint this gifted/
^ i thought that could have been a nice punch if you worded and re did the last line right..

other than those flaws you got nice battle tactics i guess..

spul: i can see you didnt really try to hard... cause it was ok.. still beat your opponent.. but i wanna see some guts ne blood and all those wonderful things ^_^...

v/spul

drop an honest one: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130918...
much appreciated.

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I honestly aint see no punchlines in his shit plus he aint had no actual medaphores and lines weres stretch as much as mine but w/e. keep them shits comin.

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