Da Hustla
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IP: F749 A5DA
So Who The Hell Spits first R???
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06-14-04, 04:49 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
We Spit Same Time Kid...When You Get Back On PM ME..
~R~
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06-14-04, 11:56 PM
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Da Hustla
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IP: 8C64 DD55
checkiin in iight 1
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06-15-04, 12:02 AM
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Da Hustla
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IP: 8C64 DD55
Yo Re$tricted a Bitch u only care about Posts...
Nigga Still Can't win and we got Crew Votes...
Yo Battlein me is gonna get ur ass Suspended...
Nigga Suck Dick and now my verse gets u Offended...
Leavein a Fo Re$tricted Like Wrestlin he's Pined Bitch...
Nigga DOnt Wanna lose so he said spit in 10 Minutes...
yo man Its like this battle on him spittin is a Sin...
He Probley Pre-Writtin his shit and still didint Win...
So now i know that imma sick ass Emcee...
Juss Like Gay Dudes This Re$tricted dont "Fuck" Wit me...
Done no Feeding
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06-15-04, 12:11 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
I Lace These Rhymes With C4 and Loads Of Dynamite..
So When You Bite..It Blows Your Whole Proportion Outta Sight..
I Ejaculate Late On This Bitch..Slap Him With The Used Condom..
Fucking Wit Me Only Time He'll Have Complex Illness On Him..
You Fucking With A Vet With Enough Weight To Crush Boulders..
Before Christ? Fuck Yea...Your Still Is 1000 Years Older..
Taking More Ball's On Ya Knees Than Piazza From The Mets..
Couldn't Get A Vote Battling Me Twice..No-Respect From The Vets..
Requesting Death..Cause I Punch Skulls Threw Brick Walls..
Collapsing Breath..Cause You Just OD'd On Chris-Styles-Meth..
~R~
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06-15-04, 12:13 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
My 3rd Bar Is Suposed To Be...
Your Style Is 1000 Years Older...
~R~
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06-15-04, 12:14 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
::::....Uppin#1....:::::
~R~
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06-15-04, 12:17 AM
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Da Hustla
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IP: 8C64 DD55
That Was Weak From u Re$tricted and wait hol up hol up u didint even Check in how the fuck do i kno u choulda Took Way Longer Yo this some Werid Ass Shit tho
its all good i dnt care 1
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06-15-04, 12:27 AM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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dayum! R came hella hard on this. Complex??? HAHAHAHA - simplist shit i ever seen. simple simple simple... Best line: yo man Its like this battle on him spittin is a Sin...
He Probley Pre-Writtin his shit and still didint Win...
R best lines: his whole verse.
Vote: R
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06-15-04, 12:36 AM
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-Menace II Society-
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IP: CC6A 8028
aiyo my man complex illness...what da fuck is up? your ryhmes were way to simple man, i could see that from da start wit those simple ass rhymes. u gotta elevate but u got potentional...no beef...my vote goes to restricted
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06-15-04, 04:33 AM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 205C 5614
yo complex illness, your shit ain't complex at all, all too simple eh, Restricted out played this cat everywhere pretty much.
Vote: Re$tricted
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06-15-04, 04:34 AM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 205C 5614
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06-15-04, 10:12 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
Once You Poll Vote Man....
~R~
Uppin Dis Shit
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06-15-04, 10:20 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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everyone is pretty much sayin the same thing about complex's verse...that its too simple...but 2 of the people who voted their rhymes are simple too lol...anyways...complex you had an ok verse but u cant beat restricted with it... you had 3 ok bars...your opener was decent...and your 3rd and 4th bars were good...you need to focus more on harder punches...your structure was really good tho...and consistent flow...no multies...wordplay...decent meta's....decent verse
restricted you came pretty weak here...i seen much much hotter form you....it was a good verse but not soemething i expected from you...that was like a big kountry rhyme... anyways good punches not too hard but better than complex's....good multies and wordplay decent structure consistent flow....and i think your closer was weak...just horrible lol
vote: ~R~
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