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06-09-04, 12:56 AM | #1 | |||||
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Dangerous Mind
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I spit straight from a dangerous mind into a rhyme my only dream is suicide, do or die, I wanna shoot up my school worse than the Columbine so many kids I want to die for tormenting me all out through my life I asint got no friends except a airsoft gun and a 6 inch knife cut myself every night its my way of saying good night let myself bleed cuz its a rush for me the taste of my own blood makes me crazy and I cut and slice again and again mom dont care she sits on the couch drinkin a bottle of jin my excuse for my cutting is everybody hurts me emotionaly now it is my turn to hurt me physicaly sonn it will be internally, I dont need drugs to get me high I dont need beer to get me by all I need is a pen and a pad to let my emotions slide this is how I get out all my anger, frustration thats winds inside this mind of mine, I am already in a rage and I am only 12 years of age see here are my past 2 years at the age of 10 my pops died I barely cried unless it was to extinguish the fire in my eyes it still is burning as my age keeps turning my pupils get smaller and the fire rises I asked myself why is this man screw it I am sick of this.... feeling sorry about myself all I am saying is that I am living in a livin hell//
Man..... Not much but it should do I am tired and cant right
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06-09-04, 01:12 AM | #2 | |||||||
Light Weight
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I like the deepness you put into it
people dont do that much any more... all they want to see is if it rymes... when in fact its ryming as well you droped a nice one...keep it comming like that...big ups to you hommie..
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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06-09-04, 01:15 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
thnx man... uppin
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06-09-04, 12:07 PM | #4 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: B20F 67F7
i wasnt feelin it only cuz it had a bad flow and it was in paragraph form work on breakin it into lines iight keep elevatin..
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06-09-04, 12:13 PM | #5 | ||||
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And You See' lol...!! I Thought dizz Was For Me' ...!! What A DissapointMent..!! lol You Got To Quit Doin That To Me!! Wit 'Dangerous Mind' .. and All..!!!! Jezzus' ..!!!!!!!!
-Straight Piece Though-
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06-11-04, 09:33 PM | #6 | |||||
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Ayo
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Ayo INSAINE16 Fuck you eh
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06-17-04, 02:14 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was ok but 2 lengthy 4 me i like when u started but u lost me afta a while but u'll get betta
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