any thing goes
at least ten lines

ok man im gonna be straight up with ya luther
I fucked ur mom in her smelly ass funuter
that amount a times we've fucked is really pretty scary
she loves it when i give it to her ass missionary
the only way to be me is by a fuckin fluke
you just dont have what it takes "lil' Luke"
This is gonna end with u fuckin chokin
u cant beat this what the fuck u smokin
im takin u to school and it happends to be tonight
this is no rap battle this is a fuckin lyrical fight
They should just change the name to brandonstheshit.com
and ive told u before you cant fuck with white Chron

whitey get this

lil luke get chips like frito lays
dont touch or you will be down for dayz
i'll treat you like Martin Lawrence
and motherfuckin end your show
what you mad about I see a lot of tightened jaws
I got a lot of hoes but i'm really really liking yours
man I give u props
for getin off with icey hot
man u talk about fuckin my mom
my moms like 300 fuckin pounds
im out

u cant rhyme just face i whooped ur ass and now ur ambarsed

and do u coppy comp much be original dick lick.....

ima go wit white chron on this one good set up but you could still use better vocab. try to use more than two rhymin words and not to mention make it flow togeather!
and luke sad battle verse man you really need allaround practice!
and dont get pissed luke its constructive critisism!

peayce

ok i hit yall wit the truth now yall hit me up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123748

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

im going with lil luke. U both sucked ass, the worse ive ever seen on RB, but...
Lil luke had a meta and a lil bit harder punches than whitey. Whitey u had 0 metas....

Vote: Lil Luke

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aight check it.....Lil luke came harder with the punches.....Both had
the structure but luke came harder....Both work on similies and metpahores
a lil more......And tha balance keep elevatin and work on complexity
v/luke

Return the favor against me vs mc murder go and look its in the front page of front lines go ahead im waitin...

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votes plz

this battle doesn't diserve my vote, so imma jus call ya'll fags and be out.
oh and u suck on socks, oh check the sig it me sayin fuck you thru 2pac.
hahahah your horrible.

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vote vote vote

you lil luke u didnt seem to be all that good.face it. u lost homie

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im gonna have ot say white won this battle...he had atleast 1 of everything....while lil had nothing his verse had 0/50...he did not do really anything in his verse sorry....bvoth of ya suck so.....basically ya both need to quit rhyming but astleast white knows what rhyming is

White

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white won thie battle...he had some punches, wordplay, a little meta's, & vocab was aight...lil didnt much of it...white had some good rhymes in there also..flow was aight..

vote: white