Ight heres rules:
No bitin
No recyclin
No D/R's
No hate
No crew
15 line max
30 mins after u check.(u have 10 mins max to check)

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Quik
Popa Doc?Well its time to end u check Ur Clock//
1-4 Thats just sad,You should be shot with a Glock//
Ur just a wanna-be u had to steal ur name from 8 Mile//
Well ill be the Judge of ur Fate ur Now up for Trial//
U get the Death Sentance and U get the Lyrical Injection//
Tryin to Win a battle u Always end up in Straight Rejection//
Maybe next time u wont Face a True Street MasterMind//
Im Spitten at You with Lyrical Acid leavin ur ass Blind//
You just got the 10 Bar Murderous Flow and Dash//
That Blindin Light was u dien on the Mic just watch the Flash//

ight there real quik

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ayo terror is tryin to be scary, tryin to frighen me like a terrordactal/
in actual fact, i'll cut you some slack, be careful where your treading/
cuz i got a layer of ice surrounding, you don't wanna be liein drowned/
i'll rip your head off like I got a shot gun triggerd n blowed the fuck out/
your a mark on my terortory spot, shoot a bullet spinned n hit u on ur temple/
your a wackass rapper who thinks he's clever wid friendly smiles/
to me ur nothin but piles, who was a good for nothin for a while/
you get stuffed away like a scotch egg, with extra bread crums/
fuckin dumass i'll put you ina wheel chair, cauturpuling you to the damn air/
your girls call you hunny cuz dey rob all every penny of money you own/
this bitch is contantly stoned and moans cause he can't get a job/
your a shit manuer, a shit piler, bringing any kinda shit to make you wilder/
your a horny fuck stuck wid ya bitch of a hour, old lady lover, ceressing wrinked ass liker/
your one pound of shit from me, couldn't measure brain waves from me/
i say dis swifty like im lifting your soul by graverty, levertating into a furnace/

Lol uppin

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WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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question all things

Votes plz

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Aiyo...I Dunno This Is A Close Battle..

I Mean Both Spits Weren'T THat Nice...But I Gotta Give This One To Terror..

His Was Better Constructed and I Liked His Flow Better. Popa Your Shit Could Be Nice, Just Work On Dat Word Usuage, Concepts, and Structure.

Props To Both

Vote - Terror

~R~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

ayo terror is tryin to be scary, tryin to frighen me like a terrordactal/
in actual fact, i'll cut you some slack, be careful where your treading/
-dude that was wack a terrordactal?? really and what where you planning on rhyming with that?

Otherthan that is was an okay battl, Unholy take the W cause his was short simple and to the point, Nice short bars nice punches all the whole way through.

Papa Doc, I've voted for your shit before but this was not your best verse I think you rushed it, how many battles you got goin' on right now?? Slow it down get creative, no rush just do it right,

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mad close, popa ur shit coulda been nice, should have shortened lines and rhymed in bars though (structured) also have a set up than a punch, than ya probly woulda taken him

terror u take it for the structure and punches, not too good but ya took it

i like unholy's better. i didn't have to read a term paper. i still think both of you should step your punches and wordplay up alot.papa doc you wrote alot of shit and i got kind of tired of reading it, but i did, and it made no sense. nothing rhymes.unholy at least you rhymed and i understood what you were tryin to get across. return the fava

vote=unholy

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

Uppin here.

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I liked unholys better. His rhymes were better and he had his flow on lock

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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0
Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0
Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1
Win #5 - $ik; 5-0
Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0

i gota vote unholy because his punches are strong and he jus hot right on. in this battle it all came down to punches

yo return the favor people please vote in this battle cause i need it to close

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124727

Uppin

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