yo lets do 10 bars no d/rs or hate votes.

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yo check this


Dawg, you fuckin wit me, you gonna see mad clips like a movie critic//
Lose the gimmicks, cuz you play me for a fool, im puttin the tools to ya fitted//
Doc, when you handlein the rock, it's like ya name change to Shaq//
You neva seen the glock, so you can substain the gat//
If you give me the chance,ya block gonna get Imperalized//
Just cuz you see the gun fiyah in my Sig. im scarin you guys//
And im from b-more so you weak niggas dont put fear in me dog//
Cuz yall walk the streets wit no heat like security guards//
On the other hand, I stay wit heat, just like you stay wit bitch niggas//
Just to let you kno, you basically a hermaphodike cuz you a bitch nigga//

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by da time im done wid you, the streets can finally own you/
takin you down wid one hand smothered across ur mouth/
your in jepudation-ellimination- takin you down like a wrestelor/
causeing your features to deteriation, fucking hoe your nothing specialer/
your done steping to me, i'll tie you to a fuckin tree punch fuckin dents
till your fuckin demented, go ask my friend salve to give me ur shot
gun double barrel enough to blow your head till your head stumbles on a mine-step This bitch can't come cleaner wid lyrics when jacking off when he showers/ can't take a hint, I spark him up like flint breaking over u lik a tower
none of your punches hit me, just deflected and hit me like a daisy flower/

uppin votes

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i vote street legend. he had better punchlines and flow. outsider, you gonna have to put more effort in man. the potential is there, but you need more personals and better punches. also stop using random cuss words lol. apart from that, good battle.

ps. please check out my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605 and drop your opinion. thanks.

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Please Check My Rhymes:

Sum Shit I Wrote

ok can u actually vote on it on the poll thank u

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some of his shit didn't even rhyme lol and had no multies omg god you got so merked.

flow street

vocab outsider

multis outsider

opener street

closer neither

overall vote street


it was a nice battle both of u can elevate lots of potential on both sides

ok ok this was a aight special not tha best but decent well I give
this one to Street Legend because his punches hit harder than Outsider's
drop & his flow I was feeling......Outsider some of your shit didn't rhyme
but you starting to rhyme now but I still give this to Street Legend

do a honest vote on my site no hate votes or anything the links in my signature aights???????????????????????????????????????

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